
A Thorn in My Throat
如鲠在喉
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 209k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
73Chapters
49Favorites
10.0Score
44Nutrient gifts
554Clicks per chapter
28Comments
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Reader comments 20
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…I! Why doesn't this party die? If I weren't afraid of being banned, I would really want to curse people.
I feel so sorry for Si'er, and Mrs. Fang is disgusted.
There are so many words in the whole text, but it seems that the word "despite" is not used correctly. They are all "in spite of". Every time I look at this kind of place, I have to wander around for a while to understand it. Moreover, isn't this a modern article? I almost thought it was an ancient article at the beginning. No matter who it is, the speech is always "It's..." "It's me...", And there are many places where the sentences are not fluent. And that pause, so ancient and early style. There are some words that do not need to have a comma in the middle, but they have to be added. Every time I see this kind of place, what I imagine in my mind is a "great reading" of the lines with rich emotions and clear pauses. Alas, I hope the author will pay attention to it.
This is definitely not he. The author promised to only write he. Wuwuwuwuwuwu.
You can definitely continue writing this...
Ha
Cheers to my wife, I really love this plot
It's so beautiful!!! Stayed up late to read it~
Did this sentence "I hate you" remind Chu Si of the girl he liked in his previous life?
This male protagonist has the air of a scumbag from ancient times! So authentic! Show your sympathy to the author!