My name is Qi Fu, and I'm a boy with no ambition.
My dream is to lie down instead of sit, sleep instead of stay awake, and spend every day doing nothing but eating and waiting to die.
So why are my days so nerve-racking?!
Why is life so hard? I have endless pills to refine and endless talismans to draw!
When will these days of nonstop cultivation ever end?!
And you, the man who keeps staring at me, get away from me!
My name is Yuan Qiaohan, and I'm a Martial King with a fearsome reputation.
I thought I'd spend my whole life killing and committing atrocities, becoming a fiend everyone feared.
But my older brother says I have to marry, and my bride has to be an "ugly" wife who can't cultivate!
Fine, I'll marry her. But why is my wife so beautiful?
Oh! She's an all-around genius at alchemy, talisman-making, and cultivation!
So many people covet my wife! I'll kill them!
"Fu'er, hurry! It's late!"
"Yuan Qiaohan, you bastard, get away from me!"
"Darling, don't be scared. I'll be gentle!"
"Ah! That tickles... there... don't..."
"Darling, if you don't loosen these meridians, your cultivation won't go smoothly!"
"Then stop putting your hands all over me!"
"How can I loosen them without using my hands?"
This is the story of a cute bottom who ends up in another world and is forced to work hard at cultivation.
It's also the story of a cute top who works hard at cultivation so he can finally get his wife into bed.
Theme: Gentle yet powerful people can gradually gather strength around them.
Ah, it cost him his life but took away his savior's son. It was really unacceptable for such a young child to leave his parents. . .
"Just when I was sighing, I gave the author a big bug~" time
The writing in large letters is okay, but the schedule is a bit crowded for some reason, and I can't read it. I suggest that the dialogues and psychological descriptions be divided into lines as much as possible, so that you won't be unable to read it. I just looked at other people's layouts and found that their paragraphs can only have two lines at most. Yours is too crowded, although this article still has many flaws. Flaw, but for a newcomer, you did a good job. I believe you will feel it when you read it. You always feel that something is wrong but don't know what is wrong. I rarely write long reviews. I just saw that the newcomer wrote a topic that happened to be of interest to me. I couldn't help but say, if you think I am nosy, you don't need to read this comment. I hope you will get better and better.
What should I do with 195?
"Qing" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ light
"King Wu is only over 30 years old" is a big bug for the author~
Earlier (Chapter 18), it was written that King Wu was in his early 40s
"S-class characters" are a big thorn in the side of the author~ Task
"I was caught quickly" is a big bug for the author~ Catch in
"Building up the later stage" is a big thorn in the side of the author~