The CP I Ship Has to Be Real

Big shout, let me make some comments~ 1. I think the article must have blank lines, otherwise it will look like a pile to others, which will greatly affect the visual perception. 2. I think the character's psychological activities are a bit confusing. It's just that the characters have psychological activities, but it's not clearly stated, which makes me a little confused. 3. Damn, you're not very good at word count~3000 words guaranteed~ 4. I heard that the first-person perspective is not easy to sign contracts~ 5. The above are all personal opinions. Come on~ (ps: you can delete the comment with two points)