Congratulations on completing the first unit. It's rare to see a completed story of yours. How difficult it is. You finally defeated yourself XD =V=
It turns out that everything is Xiao Xu's [] (no spoilers for the sake of other readers). The description of the foreign environment is good, but some places still lack one or two sensational sentences to promote the climax. The last paragraph reveals that this is indeed the "Longevity Girl Incident". What will the next story be like? Looking forward to it~
Very pretty, spread the flowers~
Is there any connection between the amusement park and the circus and the two couples?
Is this a mirage created by the four of them? Or is there interference from other forces? Are the four people really ghosts?
PS: Speed up the update!
Very pretty, spread the flowers~
Is there any connection between the amusement park and the circus and the two couples?
Is this a mirage created by the four of them? Or is there interference from other forces? Are the four people really ghosts?
PS: Speed up the update!
Congratulations on completing the first unit. It's rare to see a completed story of yours. How difficult it is. You finally defeated yourself XD =V= It turns out that everything is Xiao Xu's [] (no spoilers for the sake of other readers). The description of the foreign environment is good, but some places still lack one or two sensational sentences to promote the climax. The last paragraph reveals that this is indeed the "Longevity Girl Incident". What will the next story be like? Looking forward to it~
Very pretty, spread the flowers~ Is there any connection between the amusement park and the circus and the two couples? Is this a mirage created by the four of them? Or is there interference from other forces? Are the four people really ghosts? PS: Speed up the update!
Very pretty, spread the flowers~ Is there any connection between the amusement park and the circus and the two couples? Is this a mirage created by the four of them? Or is there interference from other forces? Are the four people really ghosts? PS: Speed up the update!