Olivia didn't understand the Sorting Hat's decision at first. Not until she pressed her wand to Draco's neck and told him in his ear, "Don't forget, Draco, I'm a Slytherin. I'm greedy. I crave power. I was born this way."
The plot follows the original story, and the pacing is rather slow. The heroine doesn't start out as a badass, either. In fact, she's pretty soft in the beginning...
Because the ID for my previous account, "A Delicious Piece of Bread," was linked to the wrong credentials, I've moved the entire story here! I'm still writing this out of love and don't want to be writing to an empty room, so please add it to your reading list and leave comments. Sending you hearts!
Sometimes JJ acts up and keeps the chapter list stuck on "under review." If that happens, just turn to the next chapter from the previous one and you can keep reading.
I've put two upcoming novels on my profile. If you're interested, please add them to your reading list. I'll probably start updating around the end of the month, once a day. Love you all, mwah!
Theme: It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live, remember that.
... Okay, although I know you shouldn't be so fussy about fan fiction, I still don't like the heroine's mother. She breaks up with her family for love, and she never regrets it. She only regrets it occasionally after her daughter becomes a witch. Oh my God, what kind of white-eyed wolf is this?
The professor wouldn't deduct so many points from Slytherin, right? It's his own house.
Weasley is not Veles
It's great to deduct so many points... In the end, each of them got fifty points. It's hard to imagine that the heroine would be even worse off if she wasn't isolated in this situation.
Very well written, cheers up
Big update. . . Tears
Yazi who hasn't shown the big devil yet
Green should be in front of Malfoy, right?
Crookshanks is only in third grade.
How can we repair quickly and wake up!!