A notice about the recent suspension of updates:
I have to write my graduation thesis and take two exams soon, so I'm very short on time.
After discussing it with friends in the group, I especially feel that this story is rather mediocre as written, so I plan to make major changes and rewrite the whole thing. I'll resume updates once it's ready.
I'm very sorry for any inconvenience this causes T_T But I promise that this, my first serialized story on Jinjiang, will not be abandoned, even though I really do write slowly, sigh.
The three great witches of the martial world have committed countless atrocities: Qiu Haitang murdered her father and forced her aunt to submit; Lan Xinrui is a man-eater; and Liu Xu uses the blood of infants to preserve her beauty. They have earned the hatred of both humans and spirits, and all righteous heroes seek to slay them.
The three great beauties are Lou Mengke, charming and lively; Su Heyin, cool and dazzling; and Zhu Rouyu, gentle and gracious. Every young martial artist considers it an honor to marry one of them.
Lin Yuesheng, the Qinsheng Young Master, is the object of every young maiden's affection. He has passed through a hundred flowers without a petal clinging to him, and declared long ago that he would marry only the three beauties, and would marry all three, until he met Qiu Haitang, his fated nemesis.
Shen Yinli of Xiaoxiang, a swordsman and scholar of unsurpassed talent, has a loving wife and a harmonious marriage, and lives a carefree life. Yet, at the age of thirty-six, he too is inexplicably drawn into rumors involving Haitang. The people of the martial world joke, “A pear blossom tree bends over the crabapple.”
Meanwhile, what Qiu Haitang hates most is having to fend off rumors from the martial world while fighting the Japanese pirates at sea. Words can be terrifying.
Character introductions
Haitang: Leader of the Jieshen Sect. Her childhood taught her to be strong. For the first half of her life, she lived only for revenge, which made her an outcast in the martial world. Stubborn and arrogant, she is really just a little girl beneath her witch's disguise, innocent and kind.
Lin Yuesheng: Dashing, flirtatious, warm-hearted, and always pursuing women. He recovers from emotional setbacks with remarkable speed. He's clever and learns anything at a glance, but apart from chasing women, he doesn't put his heart into anything.
Shan Xianyi: Cold and aloof, with no interest in women. Extremely stubborn, he bears everything alone, no matter what happens. He has gone to great lengths for Haitang.
Shen Yinli: The sworn younger brother of Haitang's stepfather, and her uncle in name. Mature, steady, and understanding, he excels at the zither, chess, calligraphy, and painting. After losing his beloved wife, he grew despondent, until he met Zhu Rouyu.
Zhu Rouyu: Gentle, virtuous, especially skilled at needlework, and quietly comforting.
Bai Jingshang: Ruthless and unscrupulous, with a strong streak of aggression and possessiveness.
Meisuya: An Indian woman who looks remarkably like Haitang. She is engaged to Gu Er, the left envoy of the Jieshen Sect. Her origins are mysterious.
Lou Mengke: Charming and adorable, but also prone to the tantrums of a spoiled young lady.
Appendix:
The heroine has a lot of character, but I don't know when she will be updated?
Come on, please write.
Very fluently written
Expect more updates soon~ Author's reply:
I'm busy graduating recently, so I'm sorry. .
This article needs major revision, so I can't update it for the time being. T_T
Sorry. .
I think Zhifan quoted it well.
I think it's just right
Click till then
Very interesting
I hope they get together
But why do I feel that taking blood from babies is so evil = =
In terms of quality, they are both more evil than Begonia. Author's reply:
In ancient times, filial piety came first, but Haitang killed his father and got into trouble with his uncle, so--!!!
There are so many characters coming out, I don't know who is who...
Then, after just reading the text and the first chapter, I had no idea who the protagonist was. If all the people who appeared here were the protagonists, then I would be ORZ... Author's reply:
Sorry, there will be major changes. Please wait a moment.
The group to comment here has already said it very carefully, so let's briefly talk about it.
According to Xianxian's thinking, it is better to take the martial arts route for this article. If it is a romance, it will be covered by martial arts and disappear without a trace;
Martial arts mainly relies on scene descriptions to represent the kind of martial arts classification, but Xianxian describes very little. It is recommended that the scenes be outlined with words and the effect should be very good. The character descriptions are also pitiful. Sometimes the characters are not necessarily constructed by physical descriptions. They can be constructed by behavior, words, deeds, psychology, etc. I will take a closer look after Xianxian has changed it~! Author's reply:
Hmm~~ I will revise it carefully. Thank you Shuishui^_^
Dear, I think your writing is very good.
But there were so many colors at the beginning, and for a while, I didn't get over the many colors. And the initial acceptance was so shocking. . .
Let's encourage each other. Shake hands. I'll take a look at it later.
Leave flowers slowly. . .
Don't mind it. . . I don't like leaving random reviews for people. . . SO. . . Author's reply:
Thank you Wei An^_^
Your suggestion is right. The copy is so shocking that many people may not be able to accept it. I will slowly change it--!!
Let's encourage each other^_^
Is there no document preserved? It's very tiring to write now.
Don't worry, we'll cheer you up and just give up the article:) The author replied:
Ahh... I just wrote it now~crying~~
But I promise, I will finish it and I won't abandon it~
Fairy woman is so kind, so touching~~
Lin Yuesheng touched his chin: "Begonia, accept it. This is also my intention."
Well, Lin didn't know Haitang's real name at this time. It should be Ru Yan. The author replied:
Um~~ Clerical error, clerical error~~
Thank you Maoyan:)
The heroine has a lot of character, but I don't know when she will be updated?
Come on, please write. Very fluently written Expect more updates soon~ Author's reply: I'm busy graduating recently, so I'm sorry. . This article needs major revision, so I can't update it for the time being. T_T Sorry. .
I think Zhifan quoted it well.
I think it's just right Click till then
Very interesting I hope they get together But why do I feel that taking blood from babies is so evil = = In terms of quality, they are both more evil than Begonia. Author's reply: In ancient times, filial piety came first, but Haitang killed his father and got into trouble with his uncle, so--!!!
There are so many characters coming out, I don't know who is who... Then, after just reading the text and the first chapter, I had no idea who the protagonist was. If all the people who appeared here were the protagonists, then I would be ORZ... Author's reply: Sorry, there will be major changes. Please wait a moment.
The group to comment here has already said it very carefully, so let's briefly talk about it. According to Xianxian's thinking, it is better to take the martial arts route for this article. If it is a romance, it will be covered by martial arts and disappear without a trace; Martial arts mainly relies on scene descriptions to represent the kind of martial arts classification, but Xianxian describes very little. It is recommended that the scenes be outlined with words and the effect should be very good. The character descriptions are also pitiful. Sometimes the characters are not necessarily constructed by physical descriptions. They can be constructed by behavior, words, deeds, psychology, etc. I will take a closer look after Xianxian has changed it~! Author's reply: Hmm~~ I will revise it carefully. Thank you Shuishui^_^
Dear, I think your writing is very good. But there were so many colors at the beginning, and for a while, I didn't get over the many colors. And the initial acceptance was so shocking. . . Let's encourage each other. Shake hands. I'll take a look at it later. Leave flowers slowly. . . Don't mind it. . . I don't like leaving random reviews for people. . . SO. . . Author's reply: Thank you Wei An^_^ Your suggestion is right. The copy is so shocking that many people may not be able to accept it. I will slowly change it--!! Let's encourage each other^_^
Is there no document preserved? It's very tiring to write now. Don't worry, we'll cheer you up and just give up the article:) The author replied: Ahh... I just wrote it now~crying~~ But I promise, I will finish it and I won't abandon it~ Fairy woman is so kind, so touching~~
Lin Yuesheng touched his chin: "Begonia, accept it. This is also my intention." Well, Lin didn't know Haitang's real name at this time. It should be Ru Yan. The author replied: Um~~ Clerical error, clerical error~~ Thank you Maoyan:)