Overcome by intense emotions, the older brother did something he would regret for the rest of his life. He then sought the gods everywhere, and at last won himself another cycle of life...
Core theme: We can never make up for the mistakes we made in the past.
The story is complete and the tragic ending is also very spiritual.
I would like to make two small suggestions. Leave a blank line between paragraphs. The current layout looks very crowded and the reading experience is not very good. In addition, the author can review it before sending it out, and some punctuation and sentence relationships can be adjusted for better results.
Come on, author~
The story is complete and the tragic ending is also very spiritual. I would like to make two small suggestions. Leave a blank line between paragraphs. The current layout looks very crowded and the reading experience is not very good. In addition, the author can review it before sending it out, and some punctuation and sentence relationships can be adjusted for better results. Come on, author~