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This article is a very traditional, cliche, and unoriginal AO romance. Please do not elevate the protagonist's complaints and verbal praise of ABO to a higher level.
After reading hundreds of pure love novels, Lin Jing went crazy under the serialization of Baitangwogua
Complain:
[Routines are always attacking and improving. Are you an AI writing the article? ]
[Gong's descriptions are always "chisel-like facial features", "wide shoulders, narrow waist and long legs", "deep eyes". Times are changing, but the author's aesthetics still remains in the Far Jurassic! ]
[A nuclear explosion-level beauty? Laughing crazy? Can a man's beauty prevent a world war? ]
I even posted several long comments with thousands of words, and my phone almost exploded.
Then... He traveled through time and became the protagonist in Baitangwogua's unfinished ABO story. He was also equipped with a book travel system that was incapable of doing anything and ranked first in nonsense.
But in the world after time travel, there is a difference between a buyer's show and a seller's show. Ah, it's simply a scam through the book.
Lin Jing: [Where is the promised alpha? Marshal? Straight A student? Emperor? And the undefeated general attacker Gu Mo Rong? ]
Waste System: [They are all waiting for your... Favor in the Capital Star. ]
Lin Jing: [The promised alphas stretched out their two-meter-long legs and appeared in a row in front of me like F4 traveling. Where are the people? ]
Waste System: [Perhaps you complained about this paragraph and it was deleted by the author? ]
Lin Jing: [... Then where is the omega who is said to be beautiful, domineering, and powerful, but is just short of being taken care of by the top alpha? ]
Waste system: [It's you, it's you, it's all you...]
Lin Jing: [Open your titanium alloy dog eyes and look, do I look like you? ]
——He traveled to a desolate star where only Zerg infested.
But he readily accepted this post-apocalyptic wasteland where he didn't have to call 996, hold brainwashing meetings during breaks, or have an alpha fall in love with him.
Who knew that there was a thunder in the sky, and alpha descended from the sky... Wrong, it was his love rival descended from the sky.
We are all omegas, why bother getting involved with each other, let's join hands and be brothers.
From now on, brother, as a role model of strong O, you will overcome all obstacles and dominate the world. I will be your solid backing. I will drink yogurt and eat ice cream to watch you defeat those alphas who are too high-minded!
Eh... There's just something wrong with this love rival?
He is always concerned about my delayed differentiation, and even likes to feed me pheromones when nothing happens. It seems... He still wants to mark me?
Please support me with my new article: pretending to be blind when wearing books
The young general Sunshine who pretends to be asleep, pretends not to be afraid of death, and pretends to be blind VS the reborn sinister prince.
Yan Che fished while reading novels at work, and turned into a cannon fodder major general.
In the original work, the young general had a crush on his destined son, King Qi. As a result, King Qi gave him a gift package that destroyed his family and destroyed his family. He also had his eyes gouged out, and died heartbroken.
Yan Che became more confident: he filled up King Qi's trap and used his strength to trick him; he took the initiative to make friends with the county lord, hugged Eunuch Yao's lap, and made him the spokesperson of the Yan family in front of the Holy Emperor.
Later, Yan Che really became blind and was sent to the Zichen Palace where the prince practiced for "healing"
Yan Che lay down: No need to work, no training, just two dishes and one soup, eight dishes and one soup, and someone was playing the piano and singing.
How is this house arrest? This is the pension directly deposited into your account!
Until one day, the blood clot in his brain dispersed and he could see the light again...
Wait, isn't the immortal beauty who feeds him medicine in front of him the same Yanzhen who wants to "collect" his eyes?
He actually brought the grape to Yan Che's mouth!
You... You... Are you sure you want to feed me like this? It's so insidious, it must be testing whether I'm really blind!
Pretending to be blind, I am a PRO. It doesn't matter what you feed me, I will feed you.
Once he escaped, Yan Che rushed to seek refuge with his elder brother.
Unexpectedly, he was intercepted by the prince in front of the city gate.
Yan Che looked at the prince's gloomy face and his knees felt weak.
Prince: Pretend, don't you want to continue pretending?
Concept: Everyone is his own universe
Reader comments
Very well written!
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In order to survive and protect the people he cherishes, he chooses to devour, digest, and absorb the enemy's power. While the enemy is finally eliminated, he is also reshaped by the enemy's power, and has to endure the pain of differentiation and resist the temptation of pheromones. The sadness of the ABO world where the enemy and the enemy share the same origin, as well as the price of power, are really well written!
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In contrast, the system is not very well written. What is the purpose of the system letting Lin Jing wear books? What tasks does Lin Jing need to complete to earn skill points? How many skill points are needed to exchange items? What can be exchanged? Only very vague answers to these questions can be found in the text, which are too vague and inefficient. Moreover, it only appears when the plot requires the system. When it appears, it basically makes sarcastic remarks, which is so hard to resist! ! !
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The emotional line is also well written.
Lin Jing is slow, but physically honest. He is also very naughty and friendly, and will do his best to help his companions and friends. Linshuang is very keen, and his feelings for Lin Jing will become more and more heavy on their own, but he is very restrained. He will try his best to calm himself down, and occasionally he will follow his own desires to seduce the other party. The contrast between them is already delicious!
In the deserted star, there are only you and me, from being wary of each other to adapting to each other's existence, gradually getting closer, the hazy throbbing of adolescence, plus a little bit of existential crisis... It's so well written, this part is indeed the most delicious part of the whole article! ! !
On campus, we often have to be separated due to academic studies and various trainings, but we cherish the time with each other even more. This is delicious too! ! !
But how can you, the author, feel that the emotional line has been written without authorization and stop writing about their emotional collisions and exchanges in detail! ! ! Also, if you don't want to write about a car that says nothing but is still very tense, then don't write about it and just turn on the light! The effect of forcing it to be written is really like the number of words in the water.
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I personally think that the plot is very exciting and there is no big problem with the rhythm, but there is a big problem with the choice of content.
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First up is Hope, who becomes almost completely invisible after arriving at the Capital Star.
Lin Jing wants to go to school, and it is rare for him to come to a stable place, so there is no problem in starting a new life. However, as life-and-death friends, they would always chat about interesting things in life and learn about each other's current situation when they have free time, right? Judging from the fact that their relationship was still very good when they said goodbye, they should have kept in communication, but the author didn't write it out at all! ! !
So the whole thing feels like He Pu used Lin Jing to come to Capital Star, then gave up on this friend and embraced a new life wholeheartedly. It's so hard to bear...
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Then there is Classmate Gu, who is a dangerous and troublesome time bomb.
Lin Jing and his friends knew about this and were always wary of him, but what about the measures at the fortress, research institute and school? It was only mentioned at the end that the institutions of these adults were wary of him and were monitoring him. But, it wasn't written at all? No one is stopping Mr. Gu from absorbing everyone's energy in class? Apart from the final plan, there are no other countermeasures written down at all?
Even if the hint given by classmate Gu was noticed, no one took any precautions to prevent the worst situation from happening, so everyone fell into the trap every time. I can't stand it anymore, it's so hard to bear.
The most difficult thing to resist is that every time Lin Jing is pursued by classmate Gu, he always imitates his own boyfriend and treats it as rejection with a "huh". I don't think Student Gu understands what this "he" means. After all, he will make a comeback next time we meet. It's so hard to bear.
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Finally, when I felt that this line was finished, I stopped mentioning the subsequent writing at all.
I don't know what the system is doing, He Pu's disappearance, the sense of inconsistency in Gu's line, and the giant insect baby that completely disappeared in the future. In the final analysis, the reason for these things to appear is this way of writing!
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I don't see any problems with the plot's rhythm. The battles are neither exciting nor boring. At least they can clearly show what is happening. Readers who think these parts are not good may just have different tastes?
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Chapters 144-146 were so stimulating that I couldn't help but write some thoughts (. After all, this book was written two years ago. Maybe the author has overcome this problem now? Thank you very much to the author for writing such a cute little couple and such a special ABO world!
I heard that the author seems to have another pen name, does anyone know what it is? Want to see
Finished it in one go, so cool! But I haven't seen enough of it. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I still want to watch the story of Huang Xing and the two of them, wow wow wow
""Xiaojing is also a fuel-efficient lamp. ""Catch a big bug for the author~
"Hearing this Life" gave the author a big bug~
"To fight or not to fight" is a big problem for the author~
Big or not
[Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it
Wuhu! I touched it! Such ungrateful joy! Although Senior Jingcha had lunch again, so sad
Did my sister meet Bucciarati when she went out? Ww
I like this story. Gentle and firm love~
Love this book so much! ! ! ! The quality of the teacher's writing has been as high as ever after so many years! Always support!
It's so beautiful, a super beautiful extra, and the ending is full of flowers~
So cute, so cute, Ouyang opened his eyes and closed them again hahahahahahahahahahahahaha I didn't dare to open my eyes, hoping it was my imagination~
There was a pause in the middle, but I finished reading it.
I wish you happiness forever! ! ! ! ! !
"Whether there is a fight or not depends entirely on the other party..." This is a big bug for the author~
Big or not
Finished with flowers, the second brush is over [milk tea] [milk tea]
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Top Replacement [Entertainment Circle]
Why Do You Have a Crush on Me Again?
He Always Asks Me to Send My Proposition [End Times]
Uncle Master, This Is Modern Times, Please Respect Yourself
Pretending to Be Blind by Wearing Books
Very well written! . In order to survive and protect the people he cherishes, he chooses to devour, digest, and absorb the enemy's power. While the enemy is finally eliminated, he is also reshaped by the enemy's power, and has to endure the pain of differentiation and resist the temptation of pheromones. The sadness of the ABO world where the enemy and the enemy share the same origin, as well as the price of power, are really well written! . In contrast, the system is not very well written. What is the purpose of the system letting Lin Jing wear books? What tasks does Lin Jing need to complete to earn skill points? How many skill points are needed to exchange items? What can be exchanged? Only very vague answers to these questions can be found in the text, which are too vague and inefficient. Moreover, it only appears when the plot requires the system. When it appears, it basically makes sarcastic remarks, which is so hard to resist! ! ! . The emotional line is also well written. Lin Jing is slow, but physically honest. He is also very naughty and friendly, and will do his best to help his companions and friends. Linshuang is very keen, and his feelings for Lin Jing will become more and more heavy on their own, but he is very restrained. He will try his best to calm himself down, and occasionally he will follow his own desires to seduce the other party. The contrast between them is already delicious! In the deserted star, there are only you and me, from being wary of each other to adapting to each other's existence, gradually getting closer, the hazy throbbing of adolescence, plus a little bit of existential crisis... It's so well written, this part is indeed the most delicious part of the whole article! ! ! On campus, we often have to be separated due to academic studies and various trainings, but we cherish the time with each other even more. This is delicious too! ! ! But how can you, the author, feel that the emotional line has been written without authorization and stop writing about their emotional collisions and exchanges in detail! ! ! Also, if you don't want to write about a car that says nothing but is still very tense, then don't write about it and just turn on the light! The effect of forcing it to be written is really like the number of words in the water. . I personally think that the plot is very exciting and there is no big problem with the rhythm, but there is a big problem with the choice of content. . First up is Hope, who becomes almost completely invisible after arriving at the Capital Star. Lin Jing wants to go to school, and it is rare for him to come to a stable place, so there is no problem in starting a new life. However, as life-and-death friends, they would always chat about interesting things in life and learn about each other's current situation when they have free time, right? Judging from the fact that their relationship was still very good when they said goodbye, they should have kept in communication, but the author didn't write it out at all! ! ! So the whole thing feels like He Pu used Lin Jing to come to Capital Star, then gave up on this friend and embraced a new life wholeheartedly. It's so hard to bear... . Then there is Classmate Gu, who is a dangerous and troublesome time bomb. Lin Jing and his friends knew about this and were always wary of him, but what about the measures at the fortress, research institute and school? It was only mentioned at the end that the institutions of these adults were wary of him and were monitoring him. But, it wasn't written at all? No one is stopping Mr. Gu from absorbing everyone's energy in class? Apart from the final plan, there are no other countermeasures written down at all? Even if the hint given by classmate Gu was noticed, no one took any precautions to prevent the worst situation from happening, so everyone fell into the trap every time. I can't stand it anymore, it's so hard to bear. The most difficult thing to resist is that every time Lin Jing is pursued by classmate Gu, he always imitates his own boyfriend and treats it as rejection with a "huh". I don't think Student Gu understands what this "he" means. After all, he will make a comeback next time we meet. It's so hard to bear. . Finally, when I felt that this line was finished, I stopped mentioning the subsequent writing at all. I don't know what the system is doing, He Pu's disappearance, the sense of inconsistency in Gu's line, and the giant insect baby that completely disappeared in the future. In the final analysis, the reason for these things to appear is this way of writing! . I don't see any problems with the plot's rhythm. The battles are neither exciting nor boring. At least they can clearly show what is happening. Readers who think these parts are not good may just have different tastes? . Chapters 144-146 were so stimulating that I couldn't help but write some thoughts (. After all, this book was written two years ago. Maybe the author has overcome this problem now? Thank you very much to the author for writing such a cute little couple and such a special ABO world!
I heard that the author seems to have another pen name, does anyone know what it is? Want to see
Finished it in one go, so cool! But I haven't seen enough of it. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I still want to watch the story of Huang Xing and the two of them, wow wow wow
""Xiaojing is also a fuel-efficient lamp. ""Catch a big bug for the author~
"Hearing this Life" gave the author a big bug~
"To fight or not to fight" is a big problem for the author~ Big or not
[Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it
Wuhu! I touched it! Such ungrateful joy! Although Senior Jingcha had lunch again, so sad Did my sister meet Bucciarati when she went out? Ww
I like this story. Gentle and firm love~
Love this book so much! ! ! ! The quality of the teacher's writing has been as high as ever after so many years! Always support!
It's so beautiful, a super beautiful extra, and the ending is full of flowers~
So cute, so cute, Ouyang opened his eyes and closed them again hahahahahahahahahahahahaha I didn't dare to open my eyes, hoping it was my imagination~
There was a pause in the middle, but I finished reading it.
I wish you happiness forever! ! ! ! ! !
"Whether there is a fight or not depends entirely on the other party..." This is a big bug for the author~ Big or not
Finished with flowers, the second brush is over [milk tea] [milk tea]