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Feng Tiantian keeps transmigrating into the role of a cannon-fodder supporting female character in a story about a proud chosen one. When the male lead is down on his luck, she willfully bullies and humiliates him, only to meet a tragic end.
Feng Tiantian: "No way. I can't put up with this."
She knows the plot by heart and understands that her only chance to survive is to become the disciple of the righteous sect's foremost leader.
So Feng Tiantian stakes out the place for eight days, until a man in black robes finally arrives from beyond the sea of clouds, riding an Azure Dragon.
Feng Tiantian throws herself at him. "Master, please accept this disciple's bow!"
The man pauses, then smiles and helps her up.
"Excellent. You have an immortal's bones, yet your heart belongs to the demonic path. Fate says you are meant to be my good disciple."
"???"
Damn it! Help! Did I just become the disciple of someone from the demonic cult?!
As a demonic cultivator, Feng Tiantian is about to be purged by the righteous cultivators.
Her opponent says coldly, "Blame your good-for-nothing master!"
A fierce sword wind crashes toward her, its intent pressing down on Feng Tiantian until she can barely breathe. Unable to fight back, she lies flat on the ground
The solid earth pours strength into her, and in an instant Feng Tiantian is radiant and leaps to her feet.
"I can do this again!"
Her opponent unleashes a signature technique, then rides the wind.
Feng Tiantian lies flat once more, then... leaps back up again.
"I can do this again and again!"
Righteous cultivator: ...Damn!
Feng Tiantian lies flat to cultivate, and today, too, she is spreading the demonic path far and wide.
Righteous sect: Don't come any closer!!!
My new story, "The Tool-Character Heroine Gives Up," by Yu Li. Please add it to your reading list~
Blurb: When Bai Wu transmigrates into a book, she immediately realizes she has become the heroine named Bai Wu in a story about a proud chosen one.
As the heroine, Bai Wu is destined to be gentle, beautiful, talented, and born into a good family. But to keep up with the overpowered male lead, she cultivates so hard that she ruins her health, her disciples scatter, and later her personality becomes twisted and obsessive. She tries to kill the male lead's love interest, only to be captured, violated, and killed by the antagonist Ning Yuanzhou.
Meanwhile, the male lead, Yi Chongshan, uses her family, her father, and his cheat-like advantages to reach the pinnacle of life and marry eighteen wives.
Bai Wu: …
Why bother being the heroine? I'll just give up!
With the male lead Yi Chongshan gazing at her expectantly, Bai Wu reaches the crucial moment when she is supposed to introduce him to her father. Instead, she quietly stuffs a pile of cultivation treasures from the table into her own pockets and tells her father, "Dad, this is my new underling. He's got decent aptitude, but he's a little too arrogant. Send him to the outer sect to gain experience for a hundred years or so!"
Yi Chongshan: ???
What happened to all that sweet talk yesterday? You promised to help me ascend!
A woman's words are lies.
*
As the daughter of the head of the foremost immortal sect, Bai Wu is in charge of a peak. She is the most talented cultivator in the sect in a century, and countless people envy her.
Ever since she started giving up, she has spent her days drinking tea, watching the action, snacking on sunflower seeds, and sunbathing on her mountain. What a comfortable life.
A disciple rushes over with news: "Master, the peak master next door says you don't deserve your position!"
Bai Wu: "He's right."
She even skips the regular meeting and demonstrates exactly what it means not to deserve her position.
Disciple: "Outer sect disciple Yi Chongshan says you used him and then dumped him, and deliberately held him back!"
Bai Wu: "Hm? He dares to badmouth me? Cut his monthly allowance in half again."
Disciple: "Master, what about the lessons...?"
Bai Wu tosses down a book titled "Cultivation: From Beginner to Burial". "Teach yourself."
Disciple: "..."
*
Ning Yuanzhou has loved Bai Wu for years. He can only watch her from afar and love her in secret, too afraid to confess because of the difference in their status.
All he can do is watch her fall in love with someone else, unable to escape the tribulation of love fate has set for her.
At her pleading, Ning Yuanzhou personally ends her suffering.
His heart dies with her.
After failing to ascend, he returns to his youth.
As he suffers through the lightning tribulation, his thoughts are filled with Bai Wu. If only he had become strong sooner, realized what was happening sooner, and saved her sooner...
Everything starts over.
Ning Yuanzhou suddenly understands.
At the initiation ceremony, Bai Wu walks up to him as Yi Chongshan stares in disbelief.
"Would you like to become my disciple?"
Ning Yuanzhou prostrates himself at her feet, feeling the sky brighten. At last, everything has meaning.
Theme: My fate is mine to decide, not Heaven's.
Many details are handled too sloppily, and I can't even empathize with the characters. Many so-called background secrets were not recovered, the number of emotional dramas increased inexplicably, the obsession of the final boss felt ridiculous, and many characters had no sense of memory. For example, the final outcome of the junior brother is to secretly join the group and then be killed. Not to mention whether the last soul dialogue can enrich the character in such a short period of time (I think not), and it does not even advance the plot. The tracking of the villain relies not on the junior brother, but on magic. Delete the role of the junior brother, and finally replace the soul with the second senior brother, the master, or even ask him from his heart. I can only say that the author should come on
In fact, I still don't quite understand the setting of "No Immortals and No Demons". I feel that the laws of heaven and earth are changed casually. Although I knew that Master and Tiantian were going to do something big, I would never think of using my body to combine with Tao to shake the laws of heaven and earth. I feel that the protagonist has not grown up enough to be able to combine with Tao. She doesn't even know what she is going to face. Just because of a coincidence and the master was banned, she had to rush to the shelves. After being briefly informed, she directly raised her sword and went into battle. She also succeeded in making her blind cat meet a dead mouse. It felt ridiculous. It was not the absurdity of the plot but the absurdity of the world. It was very ironic. If the author wanted to create a sense of irony of being both a player in the game and a player breaking the game, that is, breaking the rules and being bound by fate, then the last few chapters were quite successful. Even the sense of separation from the previous chapters became more ironic.
It felt like everything was going well up to the beginning, but the ending ended suddenly, and it felt like it was unfinished.
??? Didn't it mean that Xu Yian's injuries were cured by those spiritual liquids? Why does it disappear? Ah ah ah ah ah no
It was too hasty. I thought the love line had just begun, but it ended. Alas, I thought it was very interesting until the last two chapters. The previous plot was really interesting, but I think the ending was a bit unfulfilling. Although Tiantian's image did not collapse, I think it was a bad ending. Alas, I was a little disappointed, but congratulations on the ending. Spread the flowers.
大大我感觉你在演我 这么措不及防的吗 一点征兆都没有说好沙雕搞笑的呢 我看这本书得心理路程(哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈好沙雕哈哈哈哈哈嘎?) 好难受 你这个女人真狠心
The first time I read the full text, I kept laughing, and the ending was suddenly shocking. . . .
Damn it, Xiao Xu is gone???
Hey hey hey, I thought there would be a sequel so I kept waiting, but it's already over!
Pattern! This is the pattern! I declare this is the best women's novel I have read in Jinjiang!