A golden tree capable of traveling between worlds finds Shen Muyun, a thick-skinned, upright person who never compromises on what she believes is right. It tempts her, promising power, wealth, status, and other benefits. Shen Muyun refuses, so the golden tree forcibly binds itself to her. Shen Muyun promptly turns it over to the state. Her parents tell her: “If you can handle it yourself, don’t trouble the state. If you can’t, hand it over to the state.”
Content warning: The heroine isn’t all-powerful, and has average intelligence.
The author’s writing is limited. Personal attacks and writing advice are not welcome.
Updates are irregular.
(The title is very serious, but it keeps turning into “Stars.” I can’t help that.)
Theme: Good things should be handed over to the state.
I'd like to give you some advice. It's a bit fluent, and every story feels like it ends too hastily. But it's already written very well by a new author. I really like the setting and the imagination is rich. I look forward to the day when the author matures.
So, is that why you write so briefly?
Not one of them speaks fluent Northeastern dialect. It's really hard to imagine this scene -_-||
Why are there no connections between chapters? There is no introduction or transition to the changing world.
Is this the end? It's too fast, I can't see enough
Is this the end? Outrageous. My wife's writing is great, and I like the three main characters very much---but one thing needs to be noted. The plot is too fast, with many settings and setbacks, and it has no impact on the country at all. But I still love you(
Recommended by book friends It's so funny, hahaha~
Gone?! Finished?!
Hahahahahahaha, this feeling is really like calling a kitten or puppy
The idea is very good, but it's still about the country's development, no, it's too fast.