
Book Transmigration: I Became My Master's Doomed Disciple
穿成师尊的炮灰孽徒[穿书]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 312k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
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The ending was a bit too hasty. The overall rhythm was disrupted when Prince Tianchan came out. I don't know if it's the author's personal problem or what, but it's true that in the later stages of writing, it's easy to lose touch and lack of inspiration, causing the rhythm to be disrupted. I understand that this is the first time that the author has come across this type of writing. The content of the story is very good, but there are some problems with the character creation (for example, Qian Wei is highlighted in the middle as being very capable, but he cannot help Yan Chen in the ending, and some descriptions of the main supporting characters are too few and not three-dimensional), etc... I'm sorry, I'm not doing any writing guidance, I just saw some problems, so I hope that I can help you write better next time. Although there are many problems in this article, I still like this article. I hope you won't find my words unpleasant and verbose, and I wish your next article will be more successful.
The ending was really rushed. I saw that some of the comments made by friends below were not very comprehensive. After all, the results of many characters have not yet been clearly stated, such as Wang Sen, Qian Chenyuan, etc. The ending was really caught off guard.
Ah, why did it end so suddenly? The two of them haven't fallen in love yet. How can they end it without falling in love? How can it be finished without a kiss and a hug? How can it be finished without sex!
It's a waste of my feelings. I've been chasing it for so long and it ended badly. I'm done with it.
It feels like Plato is in love, woo woo woo.
It ended... So suddenly——!
It's over,? It's unfinished, right?
Mom, it's so beautiful
Ah, this damn Shura field, me and love! O(≧▽≦)O
Is it over? I still haven't figured out who is the attacker and who is the receiver, and I haven't seen them sleeping together!