Flames in Winter

Sister Gu is the worst. She sees the person she likes get married and have children. She also dies in childbirth. How frustrating it is. Yi Ye is too pretentious. If you have money, you can really do whatever you want.

It's quite nice, a heartwarming short story, and the ending is also very good?

Embarrassing, inexplicable. The weight of that reality was not conveyed. The heroine was described as an independent and progressive new-era woman, but here she suddenly degenerated into a woman who pays attention to three obediences and four virtues.

You said Gu Lian, such a gentle person, such a beautiful person, still makes me feel distressed when I think about it

The author could have expanded it to 100,000 words. There is still a lot of foreshadowing that he has not written. He could also write more about emotional transitions. The writing is obviously very good, so why not write more?

Look somewhere, woo woo woo

('? ') Meat, meat, meat... Meat show? Oh my gosh! Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.

"Nearby" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ help advance

This is a very good article, keep it up

Ah, the writing is good, but the transition part in the middle can be added a little more, I personally feel it is a bit abrupt.