
Qingshuiling's Ramblings
卿水令的碎碎念
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 8k Words
- Genre
- No CP
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
5Chapters
24Favorites
10Nutrient gifts
691Clicks per chapter
50Comments
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Can cookies also kill people?!
Author, you really know how to write!
Hahahahaha, Wei Yiqing: Fully automatic jealous tool man
???? That's it???
I like simple cookies, and many people write about profound and complex things. But most of them pretend to be profound and complicated. For those who think about life, I would rather read philosophy books. Of course, serious literature also has its own meaning, but I really feel that, except for a few world-class masters, most serious literature is still insignificant.
In fact, I think it would be interesting for you to write complaints or comments, and I would like to see you write current reviews. Hey-hey!
After looking at it, I realized it was actually huge! What attracts me to you is not the description of atmosphere, characterization, plot tension and reader involvement at all! No! Yes! What attracts me the most about you is your natural frankness and cuteness in your words, which are occasionally a little unruly. But the language is really interesting. It can be said that from a micro perspective, it can be full of witty remarks and frequent golden sentences. For example, "Listen to the gossip and follow the serial", such as "This amazing sentence-breaking talent that makes ghosts and gods weep". Overall, I just feel that the mood of the article is not very coherent in some places, some of the emotions are too strong, and the language is too sensational. However, it does not weaken my love for your words! It's good to want to improve, but I really hope to realize my strengths and strengths and maintain my own characteristics as I grow. I feel that reading your article is a bit like reading a Shakespeare comedy. The plot is not perfect, but the writing is very charming. Looking forward to your new work!
Hahahahahahaha, "Come here, let me touch you!"
Hahaha, I like your chatterbox, cute
Gone? Gone? Where are the buns you promised before?