She was just an ordinary girl, until that cursed jade bracelet sent her into this unfamiliar era.
But it also brought her to him.
She’d thought he was only a dream, but it turned out he really existed.
Was she merely passing through, or had she come home?
He had always seemed so calm, until he met her. She was the calamity written into his fate.
Should she stay and leave her past behind, or go and forget everything here? She began to hesitate: should she become a caged bird for love, or give up the love in her heart for the sake of freedom? She didn’t know. She only knew her heart was in turmoil.
If only life could always be as it was at first meeting, why should the autumn wind grieve over the painted fan?
People are not plants or trees; we all have feelings. Better never to have met a beauty who could topple a kingdom.
I admit the first part is really awful, but fixing it completely would mean practically starting over from scratch. So even if I revise it, I’ll only make minor adjustments.
Starting a first-person school story: "A Hero’s Dream in a Weary Life"
http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=263227
Theme:
A very good book, just sad throughout.
Great support, send flowers Come down and take a look slowly
I think... This love is like a knife and a scabbard. The love between two people is like a knife and a scabbard that match each other. They tolerate each other without leaving any gaps. But not every knife can find a scabbard that matches it. If the scabbard is too small, it will definitely be injured by Li Feng. If the scabbard is too large, it will damage the blade. If the blade is broken and only the handle is left, then the scabbard can only be discarded. But if you break it off, you must be unwilling to do so. The remaining blade will only scratch the inside of the scabbard... Numerous times... I really feel bad about this overlord meal... O(∩_∩)O
I forgot to rate it. Sorry, I'll make it up.
Haha, I feel like the extra is pretty good, haha, that's it, with unequal efforts, the results will not be balanced, and the gap will only get bigger and bigger.
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I don't know how to describe my anger and Nangong's cruelty. I hate him because of his selfishness, using love as an excuse to severely imprison Chen's freedom, causing huge, huge damage to her body and spirit! He stabbed Chen's heart with his so-called love. Even after he pulled it out, he was still weeping blood. Although it is because of love, love cannot be an excuse to hurt the person you think you love. Such love is too heavy, too selfish, and too cruel. I believe no one would want to bear it. Shouldn't love be a kind of letting go? When love is too heavy and heavy, shouldn't it be let go? Letting go may be the end of love for yourself, but is it also a kind of fulfillment for the person you love and a kind of relief for yourself? Why, why! It is necessary to use the name of love to severely hurt the person you love and yourself. Maybe time can dilute everything, but that feeling has changed. Maybe love is no longer what Nangong wants, but he wants to possess Chen so much, to possess everything about Chen, to hold everything about her in his own hands. At this time, Chen will no longer be a living person, and she will become a thing of Nangong. That's why Chen wanted to escape. She just wanted to escape Nangong's almost crazy love. Since Nangong had a chance to lose Chen, why not change himself and think about why Chen escaped. When Chen's repeated escapes finally made him angry, he cruelly killed the person Chen cared about, making the love that had already lost its freedom covered in blood again. If everything he does is for dust, then what is Su Jin! Since he keeps talking about love, what is that woman, what is her child, and what does he think of dust! Love cannot be shared, but he still went to find another woman and let that woman bear his child. Didn't he know that the world would be painful? The single-mindedness of love was destroyed by him. That was no longer love. Why didn't you let Chen go and let Chen give birth to a child? This is called Chen Qing! This is all his fault! If I were Chen, I would like to say to Nangong in front of him: "If this is all a mistake, then you must solve it yourself. Can you kill them? You can't, you don't want to at all." You may think I am cruel, but love cannot be tainted. The existence of that woman and child constitutes this kind of threat. If he can't do this, then I can only say that no one can afford the love I want and the commitment I want. The existence of impure love itself is a mistake. I would also like to comment on that woman. I can say that she is very mean. It may not be her fault at first, but later her methods are very vicious. Why should she be compared with Chen? She is not worthy. But this bitch hurt Chen severely, which made Chen's desire to go back even stronger. Chen abandoned her dear child, but this woman still took the position of the second wife. This is also the reason why I can't forgive Nangong. I can forgive the child. After all, the child is innocent, but that woman is bitchy. My words are very strong. Some people may disagree. This is just my personal opinion.
Qingchen's choice is indeed a good one. Nangong's love is suffocating. Under the ancient sky, Qingchen will only live in more and more pain. It is better to go back
Nanzhu is not good Wanyan is also a bastard
I like that the subject matter is novel and the ending is good. Haha It's just that your writing skills need to be improved. When I look at the characters, I always feel like I'm seeing flowers in the fog, and I can't really understand the characters' mood. Hope you will continue to work hard.