[Read this first:]
[My first attempt at fantasy romance failed. The story and characters weren't the problem; I simply lacked the skill to do them justice. I also misunderstood what a green tea girl was, and the story went off track as I wrote it. I don't recommend buying it.
If you still want to read it after all that, go ahead and look for a free copy...]
Zeng Yidi transmigrated into the body of a doomed supporting character and painstakingly turned a losing hand into a royal flush. She got into a prestigious university, her career took off, and she had a supportive boyfriend.
Then, overnight...
Her career hit rock bottom, and her seven-year relationship ended.
Only then did she realize that no matter how hard she tried, she couldn't escape the fate of a doomed character in the book!
All because she was dating the original male lead and stood in the female lead's way.
In that case
“Why bother with love? Isn't spending the jerk's money way better?”
That very day, she took the enormous breakup settlement without hesitation and began the “green tea” life she'd always deserved, one where she could coast to success.
This stock is going up!
This movie is going to be a hit!
This sweet little flower? I know, you'll be famous!
In less than six months, Zeng Yidi was all over the trending charts, dubbed “Investment Queen” and “Goddess of the Year” (???).
When netizens asked why she had succeeded, she smiled and replied, “I'm grateful I came to my senses before I wasted my youth on a dog.”
Pei Yu, the aloof and untouchable CEO who never bowed his head (dog): ???
One night, Pei Yu cornered her in a parking garage and brought out a dazzling diamond the size of a pigeon egg.
Zeng Yidi: Giving up?
Pei Yu: Giving up.
Zeng Yidi: How?
Pei Yu: ...Woof?
#The male lead leaves the female lead because the original story requires it!!! He doesn't choose to leave her of his own accord#
#He starts chasing his wife from the start#
Theme: Even lovers who have reached a dead end can find their way back to each other
Thoughts after reading: 1. The plot is mediocre at the beginning, but falls apart at the back. It's very tasteful, so I'll just call it high and low. 2. But in fact, the plot is not the focus. The emotional line gradually gets better in the later period. The emotional paragraphs are written very vividly. The emotional state of the two people (including the male protagonist and female protagonist, and the male and female protagonists) are very immersive. At first glance, it is the old Neptune, who has rich experience. 3. The process of the male protagonist, female protagonist and man getting along is extremely excellent and delicate, and it is put back into the whole story. . . The emotional development is a bit abrupt 4. I have talked about the plot issue a lot, but I think another shortcoming is that the characters in the story actually do not have natural "growth", that is, the characters should gradually change after experiencing certain events. This part is actually not fully reflected: the heroine when she was studying and the heroine afterward basically have no changes, except for the repeated jumps in emotions. 5. The repeated jumps in emotions are a bit too much. . Maybe it would be better to make each horizontal jump longer? 6. The design of the event can be more thoughtful. It should have the effect that after experiencing XX, the heroine obtains XX abilities/quality, etc., And when experiencing the next event, the results of the previous event can be reflected; 7. This is just a personal opinion, very subjective and one-sided, and may not necessarily have reference value. 8. Why can't the male protagonist, the second male protagonist and the female protagonist be together? All very good! Can be matched in any two. . . Oh, and there's also a female assistant, which is exciting.
This ending is too hasty. There's no sweet side story. There's a lot of things left unfinished.
I don't like Director Jiang, he could be beautiful on his own, why would he interfere with the male and female protagonists? Friends and wives should not be bullied. Even if they are exes, the male and female protagonists can see the double arrows from the beginning to the end. This is really inconsistent with his outstanding character. I originally thought that he was either an assist or a legend in the world. I didn't expect that he would be involved in a love triangle like ancient romance novels. However, most of the male supporting actors appeared before the male and female protagonists were budding. As someone who is friends with the male protagonist, how will he face the person he likes being with his best friend in the future? It's obvious that his character is more likable than the male and female protagonists, he could have deserved better, so why must he torture himself to pave the way for the male and female protagonists to reunite. The neutral female protagonist is called Shura Field, and the female protagonist who is obviously on the male protagonist's side is a bloody and abusive male partner. He is simply a tool. I really hate him and feel sorry for him. Why can't he have a new, sweet and pure fairy love without any interference.
I have an inexplicable feeling that the heroine is such a scumbag
Is this the end? I haven't even finished reading it! Kill QAQ
Are the author's words the devil!!!?? Hahahahaha
The writing really impressed me. I like this bg very much, but I personally prefer the second male lead. Maybe it's because the character is what I like~ I hope to write more and better articles! Come on!
After reading this, I like the male lead more...
It was well written at the beginning, but then it fell apart.
In the new article, I understand that the surname is after the parents. Why should the surname be taken after the grandma? Is it necessary to take the grandma's surname after having a child? What is the operation?