The Sea King's Self-Cultivation

I came here for the ridiculous Shura Field and Neptune. I was still having fun twenty chapters ago, but when I saw the copy of Tsunayoshi, I started to feel something was wrong and was tortured to the point of bleeding. I thought I could continue watching with peace of mind after wiping away the blood. Unexpectedly, the next chapters were full of dangers, such as Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon. I was like a seriously ill patient who vomited blood, suffered angina pectoris, and even suffocated. Author you...! So cruel! I guessed that this kind of galgame would definitely turn into a metagame! But this is too cruel! ! ! ! ! Even if the ending looks like it, it's hard for me to recover from the after-effects of "reading a chapter to calm down". When I'm clear-headed and think about it carefully, it's just an ordinary pain abuse plot, but it's really, I'm so good at writing, it makes my sister feel heartbroken.

I was really caught off guard and cried. I originally thought it was a romance novel about Aquaman, but the more I got to the end, the more I wanted to cry. I didn't want to see the ending but I couldn't bear to read it all night long. The author is great!

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo[ingTings to Dazai and Xingxing are so warm. I originally thought it was a story about Neptune and Shura, but the second half of it was so sad and heartwarming for me. I hope that Dazai and Xingxing will be together forever, the past is like smoke, and the future will be fulfilled.

Before reading it, I thought it was a sandbox Mary Sue and Shura scene. After reading it, I realized that there are indeed sand sculptures, Mary Sues, and Shura scenes, but! But! But! ! ! I had a complete heart attack. I really tricked the dog into killing him! ! !

The overall logical concept of the story is quite reasonable. As for many points in the game where I think the logic of the characters does not make sense... I just think it is because the game is not that smart and playability is prioritized. I quite like the silly and sweet heroine, but at the beginning, I felt that the heroine in the second life was not fleshed out enough. Especially in those overturned plots, she often gave me a hazy and confused feeling, like she was trapped in a dream and didn't know what she was doing. I began to wonder if she was trapped in a dream state when she was about to die, so her thinking was relatively unclear. Especially the time reset, and many people later realized something was wrong. I thought she and others had been mentally traumatized by the game resetting too many times. But it wasn't until the end that I realized that the status in other people's games had nothing to do with the status in her game. They were separate and independent individuals. The heroine's confused thoughts are really her own actions. On the contrary, the ill-fated heroine in the first life is made more three-dimensional and realistic. Her emotional changes are reasonable and delicate, and the misunderstandings between the two in the story are also reasonable. Looking back at this article, I feel a little regretful. The game part in the front should be a part that gives readers a sense of excitement and refreshment, and the part that follows is a part with delicate sadness that stirs up the reader's mood. But the early part of the game was not shaped well, so I kept holding my breath waiting to see the "come back" part at the end that the reader said. There was really no sense of excitement... This article starts low and ends high. I don't know how long the author has been writing it. It seems that the comment section has been updated frequently? The writing style in the second half has improved significantly. I wish the author can maintain this momentum in future new articles, keep improving, and write better and better.

… Ah, why does it look so familiar to me? It turns out that I have seen it before. I was tortured to death at that time, and now I am replaying it again after such a long time... I secretly cry in the room at night and so on... Wuwuwuwuwu, am I a very cheap person, I have been cheated once, and I will be cheated a second time. Isn't it Aquaman, shouldn't it be Xiao Tianwen, why am I crying so miserably, Wuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwu

After reading it, this is how I feel:) First half: Love is sugar! (Happy Neptune) The second half: so sweet that it's so sad... (Oooh, why are they all knives?)

Sawada Tsunayoshi's script is also very sad, but there are so few scenes. Just rub your head and don't feel bad.

I thought it was some kind of Shura field, Mary Suwen, but in the end, she simply tricked the dog into killing him, wuwuwu

Although I've played it three times, I still want to ask: Didn't you say that there are many extra chapters...