Retirement in the Interstellar World

You can write in small white. But don't cram this programmed, fast-food-style sweetness into readers' balls. The following article is perfunctory in one word. I hope I won't find this on the list next time. The male protagonist has the same upper body as a certain Han. To be honest, I was relieved it ended so quickly. .

This golden finger is too big! ?

The experience of reading the previous free chapters was pretty good, but then I regretted ordering them all. In fact, I don't reject mindless short sweet stories. However, as a short sweet story, the emotional line of this one is too bad. The male protagonist is poorly portrayed, and the scenes with the female protagonist are also very bad. After reading the whole story, I just feel that the male protagonist and that scumbag have not been together. The fiancé is no different. The false feelings are disgusting. Love at first sight is for profit after all. It is contradictory to protect the heroine but show the heroine's yard to his teammates. I personally was looking forward to the portrayal of the life-and-death relationship between Xiaoman and the heroine. As far as the result is concerned, it is just a talking vine.

What a pity, the writing is quite good and the plot is cool, but it turned into a silly love story. . . . . It's still that boring old love story. . . How cool is this setting, a slap in the face, a slap in the face, and the ability to activate. . . It's a pity that the setting is good. The author could go over it again and remove the love part or write less of it and more of slaps in the face, pretending to be a scumbag and so on. The data would be much better than it is now.

Ahhhhhhhh, it looked okay in the front but was too lazy and perfunctory in the back. My money is useful! The emotional line is weird and develops strangely. If you're not good at writing it, you don't have to write it at all.

Why aren't you fully booked?

Cheers []~ (￣▽￣)~*

Good looking, easy to enjoy.

I quite like the author's writing about farming. Have you considered writing another one? Want to improve a bit, or change the background and write about modern farming and opening a shop? Looking forward to it, looking forward to it

I discovered that all the heroines of the author's novels are named Ye.