Chasing Feng Xiaotian in Douluo Dalu

I really don't know how to talk about this article. Most of this article is a direct copy of the original article. The ending has not changed anything. I just added a heroine. The heroine doesn't seem to have much sense of existence. Most of them follow the original plot. Only a small part has a little emotional line. The heroine is also a little confused. She has to challenge Tang San who is over 40 levels at level 39. In the end, she didn't read too many articles about big heroines, right? I always think that the protagonist should be stronger. After all, if you go on the stage, it doesn't matter if you lose. But she has never been on the stage and has always been off the stage. This level is a bit low, right? Every time Feng Xiaotian was injured, she would run over and cry, but you came on stage! But the emotional line is still quite smooth and there are no contradictions, but can you give me some sweets? The author really wants to eat candy

After being kissed by someone you don't like, do you still think that others have earned it? Is there something wrong with Huo Wu's brain?

Finally saw a Feng Xiaotian,? It's too difficult

A reasonable question, isn't Feng Lingling a level 39 soul master? Why is there a fourth soul skill?

There is no plot to fight Tang San, so why does the heroine want to fight Tang San? Didn't the copywriting say "Parroting"? She was just imitating Huo Wu's speech. The heroine is just an ordinary person who works very hard. The Shrek Seven Devils and Feng Xiaotian are both geniuses according to the original work. Feng Xiaotian couldn't beat Tang San, so what could the heroine do if she went up to him and get beaten up? I don't like to overthrow the original work. Everyone has their own life, and no one will have it smooth sailing. If Tang San loses in a duel, he loses, why does he have to cheat?

So, the existence of the heroine is only a few sentences in the entire article, and then it's gone?

I'm very grateful that everyone is willing to read the article, but since I started writing, people have been saying why not fight Tang San, the heroine is useless, and so on. I was a little angry when I posted the text below, so my tone may not have been very good, but I don't want to delete that paragraph. Because that was my true feeling at the time, and I didn't really want to pretend to be myself to please anyone. If someone hates me because I expressed my thoughts, I feel very sorry. It's probably because our personalities don't get along.

So in the original novel, Mao wanted to report himself to the family? Tang San obviously hid all his own special moves. What kind of halo of wisdom is this? ? ?

Like an idiot, she died during the competition with Tang San. She was not a coquettish person. Since there was a way to avoid death, of course she could be saved. She was so sentimental.

I feel like all the characters in the writing are so unlikable.