Never mind the blurb. The one I came up with before wasn’t very good anyway. It’s enough if I get around to writing it someday.
If I really have to write something, I’ll just list a few details: physically smaller gong x physically stronger shou, younger gong, 29-year age gap.
The protagonist has an insanely impressive identity, the kind that’s unbelievably awesome, but unfortunately he’s a lazy little rookie who doesn’t like putting in effort...
Still, he’ll gradually grow through one confrontation after another with his enemies, and the loss of his loved ones. The death of the person he loves will hit him especially hard.
Fortunately, he ultimately finds love in a fantastical way and becomes someone everyone has to look up to!
Theme:
I finally finished reading it, and I felt numb. I thought it was pretty good at first, but then it started to develop faster and faster, and it just went by in a flash. I didn't know if I was dreaming or the protagonist in the book was dreaming. Moreover, it was going around and around, and the characters were completely destroyed. I was pretty good at adding special effects to them in my mind, but even so, I still feel that the emotion I felt when I saw the last page could not be deceived! Thanks madam
How can I put it, the subject matter and content are okay, but the character creation is a bit hollow. It feels like, especially in the second chapter, the description of the protagonist is all about the protagonist's psychology, and the description method is a bit single. You can try to use other people's demeanor or changes in the environment to describe the changes in the protagonist. It is all psychological description, which feels a bit like the author is venting something through the protagonist.
"Ren" is a big bug for the author~ Take advantage of
Am I the first to see the update besides the author?
It's an update that hasn't been seen in a long time
Sigh... There's nothing we can do... Although I like it, I'm exhausted every day. The only day off is Sunday, depending on whether there are special circumstances...
It's just that the updates are too slow.
Finally someone writes about Todoroki Flame Division
Eh? Shouldn't the other party's son be the son?
Updateヽ(ˊ▽ˋ)ノ What is that book is really curious_(:3 \L)_ I don't quite understand the protagonist's and Shinso's reactions. Is the protagonist irritable because Xin Cao wants to forcefully control him? Could it be that the control has hidden secrets towards the protagonist (doggy Is Shinsou gritting his teeth in the back because the protagonist doesn't obey his orders? There should be more and more emotional scenes (fuck Finally~ Come on, author: 3