Reborn, But Not Starting Over

I discovered a problem: most people in the text seem to have similar speaking styles, intonations, habits, and words.

Hmm... How to put it? I had read a big one before, but at the end of the writing I didn't want to write anymore, so I sent the outline to us to read. I think your article is a bit like another big outline. Nothing else, I just think Dada's story is very good and I want to see if it can help Dada improve? I think it could be written in more detail, with more descriptions and embellishments.

The story is great, great! There are just a lot of typos, which affect understanding in some places.