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[Exclusively published on Jinjiang. The full book costs 6.4 yuan. Thanks for subscribing and supporting the official release. The original title was This Sicko Is My Boyfriend, but it was banned for being too sensitive.]
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After being the law department's campus heartthrob at T University for three years,
and the aloof beauty everyone said was hard to approach,
Lou Qian finally let his guard down around Shen Wei.
Shen Wei is wild and unrestrained, yet covered in scars.
He dragged Lou Qian onto a train that had gone off the rails,
turning his life upside down.
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Shen Wei: "If I was already in hell, waiting for my guilty verdict..."
Lou Qian: "Then I'll stand by your side and defend you as innocent."
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Aloof beauty / campus heartthrob / top student top (Lou Qian)
Wild and unrestrained / consumed by jealousy / mentally ill bottom (Shen Wei)
A campus and urban story, both sweet and angsty, with a knife hidden in the candy.
Heart-fluttering scene:
Lou Qian: "I'm going to meet a friend at T University. We'll get to the restaurant at one thirty."
"Okay. Should I get a gift for him, too?"
"I've already prepared one."
"?"
"Family doesn't need to bring a separate gift."
"..." The sweet talk came so fast, like a tornado. Shen Wei bared his teeth. "No! Flirting!"
P.S.:
1. Complete. I may occasionally fix a bug or typo, so there's no need to pay attention.
2. Top's perspective, younger male lead, one-on-one, happy ending, pairing is fixed.
3. Warning: Readers who only want chaste characters should read with caution. The bottom is not chaste.
4. Important: Some readers may find this story familiar. No need to doubt it, it's mine. If I run into old readers, I'll be delighted. Welcome back, and thank you for continuing to enjoy and support my work~
5. Also: My writing has its limitations, and this story has many shortcomings. I hope you'll bear with me. I'll keep working to improve.
Theme: Saving each other.
Let me first state that I have watched pirated copies before. But because of the third episode, I specifically ordered all of them, otherwise I wouldn't have the confidence to curse. I just want to ask the author, after giving them such a strong love, did he write this extra to piss off Gong, or did he want to piss off the readers? God knows, by the end of the article, I have cried many times for the love of gods, and I am preparing to write some thoughts on this article on my Weibo and Tieba. As a result, he was slapped hard in the face. Sure enough, no matter how well the main text is written, the extra chapters can always be caught off guard. I would give this story 90 points at the end of the main text or the second chapter. However, in the third chapter, with only a few thousand words, this article failed in my heart. [Spoilers involved] At the end, Shou gradually regains her former self-confidence and brightness. However, in Extra Chapter 1 and 2, I just took the entire attack on the enemy Qin as a jealousy fun. In Extra Chapter 3, I asked the author, what were you thinking about when you wrote this chapter??? Due to all the previous factors, the scope of activities of the feeling should be controlled appropriately, and the feeling can be enjoyed in it. Then, Gong went on a business trip for a week, and Shou returned to his old ways and went clubbing for a week. It's okay to drink, but the key point is that he actually has people to accompany him, both men and women. He was caught hugging each other, and the scene was very lively. Fuck, I went blind when I saw this. What's the difference between this and a half-caught rape scene? It was said that the attack was easily exposed without any contact with them. I'm done. A normal person, a normal person with someone he loves deeply, would be so unclean and self-conscious? Damn you, you are feeling empty and lonely and want to have fun, so you won't find friends, so go find some shady people to keep you company. The key point is that this is not just a show in the business world, it is just a simple pastime. Ha, here comes the most ridiculous thing. The sign of jealousy is punishment in bed. It's really interesting. Do you think this is fun? I'm almost sick to death. Anyone who does not restrain himself after establishing a relationship, does not give his partner a sense of security, and engages in random relationships between men and women (successful or attempted) is a scumbag. If it were me, the urn would have been raised for him. Shou is a double-standard dog. He attacked his ex-girlfriend ruthlessly, and was so helpless that he could not tolerate any disdain in his love rival. As a result, what was the point of finding someone to hang out with while my husband was on a business trip?? I asked the author how he came up with this plot of SB and EX, and the character is designed to be OOC. Don't tell me whether it's to highlight Gong's love for Shou, but to show that Shou is nourished by Gong's love and return to the self-reflective, bright and cheerful look when they first met, or is it to show that Shou is fooling around outside, and that Gong will believe it as long as he doesn't admit to kissing or having sex with others, thereby expressing that their relationship is indestructible. Ha, you enjoyed writing it yourself (I also love to write and read jealous memes). Now look back and see for yourself, do you think this is the work of a human being? Throughout the entire film, no matter how deep their relationship was, this extra story made me feel angry and sad. For the absurd past, for the cautious present, and for the future with cracks in love (just my personal feeling).
The plot has ups and downs, and the business war also highlights the intrigues, but I don't know if it was written too hastily, and the text feels a bit pale. The most important thing is that I am under control. To be honest, there are many aspects of Lou Qian that disappoint me, such as his attitude towards his ex-girlfriend, and he also beat Shen Wei; the second trial did not play a big role. Didn't he study law? He actually blamed Shen Wei for the grievances of the previous generation. His way of handling the situation was irrational at all, which made Shen Wei's already fragile spirit even worse. It didn't play much role in the later stage. It was all up to Shen Wei to solve it himself, and he had to take his feelings into consideration. This article does not highlight the theme of innocence defense, many small details are not handled properly, and the description of business wars is also a bit strange. However, overall it's okay.
After reading it, let me comment on this article. The emotional line written by the author in the early stage is very good. I have a headache when I read the business war in the later stage. While talking about Duan Xinlong's love for Shen Qing, Xinlong also messed with his sister during this period. In the end, he was only two years younger than Shen Wei. Let's not talk about these. He has occupied other people's companies for many years and ignored his son. As long as he has the slightest sense of guilt, don't worry about it. Pay attention to your son, I don't believe that Shen Wei will be raped. Since he wants to be a scumbag, he should do it thoroughly. Only in the end can he tell his son that I found out that I couldn't live without her when your mother passed away. I really love her, just like that kind of bitch. I have to do so many things
Suddenly I thought of this little brother Chu Wen, is he okay?
Author, have you changed some of the plot? I bought it a long time ago, but I feel that it is a little different from what I saw when I bought it before.
I feel like it's a mess. The ending was written in a hurry.
I finally finished reading it. I quite like this kind of character design. Overall it's okay, but I feel like it didn't reflect the title? And you can't accept the extra feed? This kind of operation. I still hope the author can write better articles.
Ahhhhhhhh I read it in one go. From last night to today, I really like this book. Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo(((p(ss...
I watched it seven months ago, so I'm reviewing it now
It's so beautiful. Can the author give it to me quickly?