[My upcoming novel, I Became a Ghost. If it sounds interesting, please give it your support!]
Blurb:
Xu Jing transmigrates into a book as the fake heiress of a wealthy family.
To save her own life, she just wants to stay away from the male and female leads' storylines
and be a good, upright young woman.
She meets a cute little boy who lives next door,
and later becomes his family's nanny.
The plot itself keeps dragging her in from time to time
to watch the male and female leads' relationship progress.
It even plays a joke on her:
the male lead turns out to be her biological second brother.
Xu Jing: The plot seems to be going in a rather unexpected direction.
But this time, with the male lead's brotherly halo shining down on me,
I should be protected by the plot, right?
[Bonus Scene 1]
Media: Mrs. Xu Jing of the wealthy Zhao family used to be their nanny!
Netizens: Morality is dead! A nanny marries her way up, come see the latest gossip about the rich!
Xu Jing's wealthy biological parents: She's our biological daughter!
Xu Jing's biological brothers: ...
Netizens: Trash media! Give us justice!
[Bonus Scene 2]
One year ago.
Classmate A: Did you know your stepmother's only after your family's money? Poor you.
Zhao Wenhao: Don't say bad things about my mom. I'm not talking to you anymore.
One year later.
Classmate A: Wow, your stepmother's amazing! She's rich and talented. I wish I had a stepmom like that.
Zhao Wenhao: Please leave. Don't let the door hit you on the way out.
[The supporting female character turns her life around and finds her own happiness]
Xu Jing: Outgoing, blunt, and an expert at muttering snarky comments under her breath
Zhao Yu: A cool, aloof heartthrob who turns into a domestic straight guy after meeting the heroine
[Content Notes]
1. The writing is amateurish, the logic doesn't hold up to scrutiny, and everything serves the plot.
2. There is a side couple: the fake heiress's brother and the real heiress get together. It's a melodramatic plot device of the author's own making.
3. Although this is a transmigrate into a book story, there is almost no face-slapping.
4. The plot is fairly low-key. Food only appears in the first twenty or so chapters, and isn't mentioned later on.
5. That's all I can think of for now. Hope you enjoy reading!
Blurb for the upcoming novel, I Became a Ghost:
Meng Yingying thinks she must be an extraordinary woman with a special talent,
because after a car accident,
she became a ghost.
This unfamiliar identity leaves her both frightened and fascinated.
She's frightened because she's been timid since childhood, and now she can see other ghosts.
She's fascinated because she can now fly and walk through walls, free from gravity.
Her parents take her comatose body abroad for treatment,
but she discovers her boyfriend's secret, and from then on, he's just another scumbag.
To get revenge, she works up her courage and starts following him around to investigate.
She also meets a human who can see her.
But he's not easy to get close to. What should she do?
[Bonus Scene 1]
Meng Yingying follows her scumbag boyfriend to meet a domineering CEO.
Then she discovers that the CEO can see her.
So she follows him home, only to find she can't pass through his walls.
Meng Yingying: Big brother, please let me in.
Qi Han has stuck ghost-repelling talismans in every corner of the room, on the doors and windows: In your dreams.
[Bonus Scene 2]
Meng Yingying: Big brother, I'll help you deal with your awful relatives.
That night, she gives her awful second aunt a haircut that looks like it was done by a dog chewing on her head.
The awful aunt is so frightened she wonders if she's been sleepwalking,
and the second uncle starts worrying that his wife will stab him to death in his sleep.
Qi Han: ??????
Theme: Self-respect, self-love, and self-reliance
The female protagonist is really miserable. It is not the most important thing to anyone. The male protagonist has a mother and son, Yan Xi as his biological parents, and Xu Miao as his adoptive parents. It's amazing. This is the first time I see such a stepmother author
To be honest, I am disgusted. The traditional Chinese happy ending is really incompetent. Is the author out of his mind?
After scrolling through the comments section, I found that Da Da Da has been supporting the original heroine. In this case, why don't you just write that she is the heroine? And wearing a shit book. I had a slight favorable impression of the original heroine before, but the worst thing about it was the setting. You said that the original heroine's family asked the heroine to leave. I can understand. After all, in the story about real and fake daughters, I always stand by the real daughter. It is normal for the original heroine to be angry, but I didn't expect that when she returned to the Yan family, the heroine would not be able to compare with Yan west? Why, Yan west has been raised by the Xu family for more than 20 years, isn't the heroine also raised by the Xu family for more than 20 years? Oh, the Xu family's relationship of more than 20 years was used to sacrifice to heaven in order to prevent their biological daughter from going astray. When you get to the Yan family, you have to be wronged. We are not willing to raise a daughter. You guys should get along well... It's easy to lose favor here. The most important thing is that his bastard Xu Miao actually had sex with his second brother. Oh my god, it seems like he swallowed a piece of shit.
I feel like the Xu family handles things better than the Yan family.
If I were Xu Jing, I would be really annoyed. This male protagonist and the Yan family are so difficult to explain in just one sentence.
Seeing this, Xu Miao is a little annoyed. She doesn't quite understand how Xu's father and mother Xu have raised cats and dogs for more than 20 years and have feelings for them. When they find their biological daughter, they can immediately get rid of their adopted daughter. It's really cold.
It feels like the whole process is mime, all communicating in the mind?
After watching it for so long, there is very little interaction between the male and female protagonists. Basically, it is the interaction between the female protagonist and the children. I feel that the male protagonist is slowly developing not love for the female protagonist, but family affection. I still want sweet love, alas!
To be honest, the first part is pretty good, but the second part where the male and female protagonists suddenly agree is quite contradictory, and it feels like a sudden drop of wisdom. The heroine is clearly described in the previous part, and she shouldn't be the kind of person who gets married just because of the child. She and the child don't see each other every day, and they were separated for several months. No matter how much you like the child, you won't just marry her. I feel that the front and the back are not the same style of writing.
The eldest brother with the most upright views,?