I'll rewrite the beginning for you. I hope you'll pick up the pen and write the ending for me.
Awful blurb:
Transmigrating once wasn't enough? It has to be a roller coaster, too?
I want to close up shop, but I'm forced to keep working?
Life is hard, and staying alive is hard!
This is a story about a materialist forced to transmigrate to ancient times and do her best to keep her business running and her life going.
Literary blurb:
The moon rises over the willow branches, and we meet after dusk.
You carry an umbrella, I hold a lantern, and together we walk down Lantern Street.
The focus: Everyday life, family matters, inner quarters, the occasional monster fight and level-up, and a slow-growing romance. (The author isn't good at coming up with ideas. If there's a plot hole that doesn't affect your reading, please ignore it automatically.)
Updates at 8 p.m. every evening. If anything comes up, I'll ask for leave in advance.
Theme: My love for you lives in the little things
Husband's brother, uncle?!
Personal feeling: The writing and language are beautiful, but the article feels a bit hazy and uncomfortable to read.
That's great, come on!
Very good, don't be sloppy, get married!
Very well written, keep it up! The description is very visual.