I always wake from my dreams in a panic: the mountains and plains stretching away in vivid green, the sky as red as blood. My heart pounds uncontrollably.
“Xiu, you once said that among your demon wolf clan, mates are bound together for life. If one dies, the other never lives on alone. I’m not a wolf, so I don’t know how to form a bond, but deep in my heart, I made my decision long ago.”
In my next life, I’ll be a little demon wolf. I’ll be born on Mount Gongga'erla, on the far side of the sealed mountain, and grow up nurtured by snow-capped peaks, blue skies, green trees, blooming flowers, and lakes. On the day I turn twenty-two, in a hot spring in the Misty Forest, you’ll come crashing down from the sky, sending water flying everywhere, then struggle to climb back onto shore. And I’ll smile and say to you, “Puppy boy, want me to pull you up?”
From that moment on, our wolf shadows will run side by side.
Until the earth grows old and the heavens fall.
The locked War arc has been moved to http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=121759
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It's been a year Not unlocked yet
Admire ~ I think the adults who wrote the ending are very strong `````` But the ending is a bit sad~
If this is the end. .. Then the author is a stepmother. . Fuck me to death.
I hope Jade Master can finish writing it soon. … This pit is too big...
It's very beautiful. I feel so distressed when I see this. … Come on, please write... I've been waiting for a long time.
Good looking But why should I lock the text when I'm just reading it? Big When can I watch it?
I couldn't find anything good to see for a while. Come on
Come on, my lord, do you plan to continue writing it yourself? It's really hard for me to accept that there are two styles of this article~ If~ if there is only that version, unfortunately I can only regard this temporary ending as the real ending~
It looks good, I hope the ending of the second part can be better
1. If it is Poying and Xiu, it looks like a human-animal fight* 2. Shada is a tragic character from beginning to end, so it seems that he has nothing to do with Shasha. 3. At the beginning, Poying was able to enjoy the hardships, but later on there was almost no character description, and the narrative was too flat, and the details were not rich enough to arouse resonance. However, the description of the war was not very good, lacking a sense of layering and relevance, making it easy to seem confused. 4. The general story is that Poying fell into a different world from real life, met Shada, the elf who looked like his friend Shasha, and understood his mission. However, when he was hesitant, he met Xiu, the prince of the wolf tribe. Sada, who was unknown to the enemy, chose the former as her partner, and with the help of Xiu, she searched for her life experience and got to know many people. However, Sada, who was born with love and hatred, used the power of evil to rob him of what should belong to him. He got the broken shadow and lost it. He left her and devoted himself to the war. Poying and Xiu were the continuation of the conspiracy 20 years ago, but they fell in love. So even in the end (the first part) both of them were saved, although the two places were separated and they were still wandering in the war. The result of the war was that Sada died, Poying returned to Bi Country and ended his biological father's dictatorial rule over the country, but his mother was still sleeping. If Bi Country and Xia Guo were severely damaged by the war, they lived in peace for the time being, Xiu came back, and the wolf tribe finally moved to a distant place, and everyone did not interact with each other until death. 5. The content of the preset story is acceptable, but the reading style has changed a lot. Although the two parts were written by different people, the sequel should also be considered as a whole. Moreover, the description of love and war is not good enough. It is neither sentimental nor soul-stirring. If it cannot arouse resonance, it will not attract people to continue reading. It is recommended to rewrite or reorganize it. It can be divided into several parts, each highlighting different key points. I think the name of the series is ok. The first part is called Huanruohuanghua. The second part is called Huanruo***. It's up to you. Okay, I'm going to sleep. See you next time.