Fox Spirit General Lu (Women-Reign)

Why does it feel like the words between the lines become less sweet as you go to the end? The two people are alienated. Lu's approach is really not conducive to the harmony between his wife and his husband. Moreover, Jiang was forced to become the emperor without the hardships she suffered in her previous life. Those hardships actually gave her valuable experience. She was only in her teens. Years old, she has not seen how difficult people's livelihood is. The throne came to her too easily, and Lu is too powerful. He hides everything from Jiang. He also holds military power and interferes in politics in the harem. Over time, people's hearts have changed. Wouldn't Jiang doubt Lu in his position as emperor? Moreover, Lu was almost repeating the mistakes of his previous life. In his previous life, he was pregnant and went to war and had a miscarriage. In this life, he was pregnant and went to rebel. In fact, the two of them did not discuss the problem properly. Looking at the extra story, the two of them were bound by palace rules, but there was no sweetness outside the palace.

It's a bad ending. The first part is pretty interesting, but the second part doesn't tell the story of the previous life. It doesn't really matter if this life is not closely related to the previous life, as long as it means it, but the male protagonist can't forget the tragedy of the previous life, so that he is still uneasy in the finale. There is no explanation for the separation in the previous life, leaving the readers confused. As for the female protagonist, tsk, to be honest, she is really like a mascot in terms of plot progression. You can see her development from a child to a fox at the beginning of the article, but even in the middle, she only develops relatively immaturely, and then, she is pulled to the throne by the male protagonist. How should I say? The heroine was still cute and lovable in the first part, but in the second half the character completely collapsed and I didn't feel the charm of the character. I don't read many female protagonists, but the fact that the female protagonist is not as charming as the male protagonist in female protagonists makes me fall into silence. In addition, in the early part of the article, the female protagonist from the perspective of the previous life was quite a scumbag. She abused the male protagonist and was still uneasy at the end. However, in the later period, not only did she not explain her behavior as a scumbag in her previous life, but she also did not make up for it in this life (the effect was not good, otherwise the male protagonist would still be uneasy in the end). She did not come back sweetly after being abused at the beginning. In fact, she was abusing the readers, right∠( ? ∠)_

I feel like it would be better if the author explained it more clearly. ① Since she is a wise monarch of a generation, let me describe Jiang Luo's talents a little more and talk about how she governs the world. ② Beloved husband, that needs to be written down. I feel like Jiang Luo is now a vassal, used to maintain the relationship between the Jiang family and General Lu. The Great Zhou Dynasty is divided into two halves, which is very dangerous. ③ You can probably guess the misunderstandings at the beginning. In the previous life, General Lu had a stubborn temper and never bowed his head. The two lost many opportunities to communicate. Jiang Luo tried hard to keep him in the previous dynasty, but thought he could live a good life without her. He put the little princess with Jun Jun to silence everyone, thinking that the queen could wait until the little princess grew up. However, the narration technique is very immature. The previous life and this life are a bit chaotic, and Jiang Luo's growth cannot be seen. ④ In the previous life, both Mrs. Jiang and Jiang Xi died. Jiang Luo succeeded in the competition and became the new emperor. Now he is being promoted to the throne. He has no power and is like a puppet. What next? Gone? At least this conflict has been resolved? Truly create a prosperous era. Moreover, it's hard to fathom what Jiang Xi is thinking. Does she focus on family interests? Or is sisterhood more important? Or does she want power? Her character can be unpredictable, but as the author, you have to know what kind of person she is, and at the same time, it also makes us feel confident. What will happen to Jiang Xi and the prince? Will she be the head of the Jiang family in the end? Will she and the person she likes get their wish? Why did Mrs. Jiang disappear in the first place? Why did she swear not to go to Beijing? In short, big brother, this is no longer a blank space, this is a dense pit! I hope that the following articles will be better and better as time goes by.

I think there are too many traps. It is obvious that Lu Fanghe and Jiang Luo have nothing to do with each other in this episode, but Lu Xiu doesn't know. It seems that Lu Xiu's heart knot that was tortured by their direct relationship in his previous life has not been opened, and it has not been opened in this life. How did Jiang Luo become the Eternal Ming Emperor? In this life, she was controlled by Lu Xiu and had little power. Can she still become the Eternal Ming Emperor? The life after the rebirth of Prince Qing's daughter is the same as the previous life that Lu Xiu experienced. Why is Lu Xiu not surprised by her rebellion? Why was Jiang Luo cold to Lu Xiu in the previous life? Is it really because of what his mother and sister said? But later my mother and sister died. Jiang Xi is also very ambitious. Is she just going to watch Jiang Luo take the throne? . . . . . . There's still a lot that hasn't been explained clearly.

Is it gone? What was the reason why the heroine and the hero separated from each other in the previous life? Is it because of those misunderstandings? It shouldn't be the case. The heroine should have her own difficulties, right? I pursued the article so hard just for this reason, but in the end there were no difficulties, only misunderstandings?

Me too, I wanted to see what the misunderstanding in the past life was from the beginning to the end, but in the end it was not revealed... The male protagonist's heart knot was not opened in the end, and everything else collapsed. I didn't insist on the heroine's character, but what is this misunderstanding and entanglement in the past life that has been hanging on the reader from the beginning of the article?

The more articles you read, the more pitfalls you will fall into. However, one principle is to read the original version. Unfortunately, no matter how careful you are about the article, you will not be able to avoid being tricked by the author in the future! I bought the full text because I wanted to see the future of Lu Xiu and Jiang Luo! Even if the two turn against each other or something else, there must be an ending! Considering the few friends around Jiang Luo and her sister, could it be that they did not resist in the later period when Lu Xiu controlled the military power??? At least explain it clearly. I can make up the settings myself! Why! It's really a rare good article, and the settings of the male and female protagonists are also very meaningful, but in the end it ended up anticlimactic! What a pity

How should I put it? This article is full of foreshadowing and pitfalls, but in the end it was neither filled in nor continued. For example, the previous lady got diphtheria. It was obvious at a glance that it was Jiang Xi who did it. There's no tape at all on the back.

Alas... A wife who can write a good beginning may not be able to write a good ending. But even if the plot has collapsed, it still insists on ending, which at least is considered a passing grade. I hope my wife will take good care of her body and mood. I will follow up on the next article. I hope the more you write, the better.

I saw Jiang Luo's life experience was mentioned in the article. What is her life experience? Why Mrs. Jiang vowed not to go to Beijing? I feel it may have something to do with Jiang Luo's biological father. What is the identity of her biological father? So curious