Don't Look at Number One

The copywriting looked okay, and I felt like I was a cookie-cutter, but after reading the entire text, I felt a little frustrated. In one sentence, I was spoiled to death. Maybe it's because the sugar I usually eat is too sweet, so I only feel a little bit of the author's so-called pampering? It's too exaggerated. The so-called pampering means sitting back and doing nothing when Xiaoshou is blacklisted by the entire Internet and insulting him at will? Let Xiao Shou solve the problem on his own, and let Xiao Shou scold him in return? Emmm didn't say that this approach is wrong, but these behaviors are a bit strange when paired with the word "pet" in the copywriting. These days, there are countless novels with deceptive copywriting. Let's put aside the discrepancy between the copywriting and the content. The entire plot development of the novel. The author himself said that it is the first time he has written a long novel. He may not have a good grasp of the rhythm of the plot. I understand, but the problem is that the description of the characters in the article is also average. I know Xiao Gong is the villain of the novel at the beginning, but after reading the whole novel and reading more than 20 chapters, I have no idea what bad things Xiao Gong has done to be defined as a villain. Xiao Shou is a tree demon with strong mental power and can make elixirs. If it weren't for the phrase "tree demon" popping up from time to time, I would have almost forgotten the setting of the tree demon! Xiao Shou's brother gave me the impression of White Lotus. He would show his face from time to time, and then end up burping immediately. Can I say that the sense of existence that Xiao Shou's brother gave me was not as good as the bunch of black haters on the Internet who scolded Xiao Shou. Lieutenant of Xiao Gong? Although Xiao Ke was killed by a bomb in the original ending, the ending was really too hasty... Or rather, the whole ending was too hasty. When I first read it, I felt very mixed. The deepest impression left on me by the whole article was that of Internet trolls. The author's writing here is very real, but also this part of the content is too descriptive and the focus is shifted. After reading the article, I can't remember anything about Xiao Gong Xiao Shou's daily life. My mind is full of other messy things. I don't like to read articles about the entertainment industry because I am afraid of this kind of Internet black content. Although it will be whitewashed in the end, I think there is always a small number of readers who refuse this type of plot. What's more, I really didn't see how Xiao Gong could protect Xiao Shou in the face of the black men. In the later stage, when Xiao Shou was beaten, Xiao Gong became a man. I have to say that the author's copywriting really deceived my heart. I hope that the author's next article can make some progress, and the plot development and character setting description can be more complete and rich.

Are you talking about yourself? Blind-eyed and blind-minded, he follows what others say. He chooses to ignore the facts in front of him and refuses to understand the clarifications on the Internet. It is clear that his fans did not report the website. The disappearance of the granary was not the reason for the fan reports and it has been restored. He has not done anything wrong but he has to apologize and take responsibility? The whole network is black because everyone knows everything. Where are your rights and wrongs? Is this what you were taught? It's terrible

Didn't the protagonist have something to say to the prince? Why did he just leave like this? It's inexplicable! I feel like there is something wrong with the protagonist's brain.

The author, I think, is that, well, it is best not to show recent events, because it is easier to bring in the things around you, and it will feel very strange. I can't explain this feeling, I just feel, well, why does this matter appear here? Therefore, things that happened before can appear, so the sense of immersion is not so strong.

It's really scary to follow what others say. I refuse to be bullied online, I refuse to be led, and there is no such thing as sympathy for the weak. Just like the author, even if I don't agree with you, I will not maliciously attack or resist you. Let's abandon the pit and stay away. From now on, we will no longer see each other. Goodbye.

Finished spreading flowers! But Xiao Ke is dead now? ? ! ! ???

"Little Zuojing" is so cute (/ω\)

Ah? Is this the end?

. . . After reading it, I admire myself. The author's writing is short, but the plot is a mess. Things develop very fast, which gives me the feeling of one chapter per chapter, and the supporting characters are super brainless. Is there any mistake? The most important thing is that the plot is very messy and unattractive, and the ending is very sudden.

? ? ? That's it