How Far Away Is the Night?

Come on, the number of words in each chapter is a bit short, so it's not enough to read. But coding is a painful and joyful thing, I understand.

Come on Xiaoye, keep writing. Seeing the long comments given by the adults below, I am really envious and say... The long comments from adults are really useful. I also learned a lot. Let's make progress together.

It turns out that I am Sofa O(∩_∩)O. How should I put it? It is my first time to write an article, and it is also my first time for Mouxi to write an article. I held my hands and looked at the word count and chapters of this article in general. Then I looked at a series of things like click-through rate, authorization, etc. So I carefully summarized some points to increase points. If you think it's suitable, you can adopt it. If you think it's not feasible, just laugh it off and pretend you didn't see anything. >.< First of all, the publishing method and authorized items, Xiaoye chose exclusive publishing and entity. In fact, if you want to increase points quickly, non-entity should also be ticked, because authorization can be multiple selections. If exclusive publishing plus entity, the coefficient is 3, and adding non-entity is 3.5. This is the first point, don't forget it. Then there is the issue of word count and chapters. Nowadays, a chapter with a word count of 4000+ is the best way to increase points. Everyone basically knows this, so I won't emphasize it here. If you can't write 4000+, a word count of about 3000 is not bad. Xiaoye's chapter is too short, and the word count of about 1000 is gone without dragging a few times. Readers will feel very depressed. If the opening paragraph is 1,000 words, it's okay, but you'll start adding words later. O()o Next comes the copywriting. Everyone advocates one-sentence copywriting. Take Xixi as an example. Xixi's copywriting has been revised many times, and then it became wordy + literary + incomprehensible. Now I am too lazy to change it, far away. Because Mouxi doesn't write about romance, she doesn't quite understand how the romance section's copywriting should be attractive, so she won't comment on this aspect. Mouxi believes that there are too many romantic articles in Jinjiang. If Xiaoye's copywriting does not attract readers' attention immediately, readers will probably be lost like this. Although I don't know what other people think, Mouxi thinks so =v=. Finally, let's talk about this article. Mouxi has a bit of a venomous mouth, so if Xiaoye feels that she really can't stand it, she can ignore it. I am a venomous person, Mo. Well, Mouxi has also read a lot of modern romance novels, and is also writing novels herself, although the ones she writes are from the same genre, haha. After reading the beginning of Xiaoye, I felt that I couldn't read it. The language is too simple, and the character creation, whether it is personality or appearance, is too simple. It belongs to the type where you can see the inner part at a glance, sweat. And the character of the character, well, how should I put it, should not be attractive to people, whether it is the male protagonist or the heroine herself, it is too mediocre. He Qianbao suggested that Xiaoye read more works of the masters. Many heroines of the masters are also the kind of girls who can't be found in the crowd, but the appearance and character of the heroines in their works are often full-bodied. This is not to compare Xiaoye and the master, but to hope that Xiaoye can learn from it. Novels in which no major events occur have much higher demands on language and characters. I read the content of these chapters carefully, but I didn't find any plot or main line. The story written by Xiaoye was not enough in terms of freshness and depth. After watching it for a long time, I didn't see what the heroine was busy with, which is what everyone calls busy with nothing. The plot line is unclear and the logic of the protagonist's actions cannot be seen. From this point of view, either it is not serious enough, or the writing skills are not enough. Xiaoye's serious self-recommendation shows that you attach great importance to this article. The material of the novel is not the text, but the author's insight into human nature and unique understanding of society. Maybe what you wrote is just a simple story, but a simple and plain story can also have many different insights. Khan, just talking about it has the number of words for a long review. The above is purely a complaint. Xiaoye can completely ignore it and let Mouxi drift away. Author's reply: Thank you, I will modify it, hug!! Thank you!!!! Love you so much