The Rose That Lost Its Kiss

The plot is not compact and feels a bit packed. And the male protagonist obviously has a first love plot, right? The type of girlfriend he will find in the future will be based on the first love. The first love Bai Yueguang will be forgotten all of a sudden? It is estimated that if the first love comes out, it will be a big storm. It's a pity that the author can avoid the topic of first love. It is obvious that the male protagonist has always been in control of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. How can two people last long if they cannot achieve equal status? With all due respect, I was very uncomfortable with the male protagonist finding a girlfriend based on the type of first love. Therefore, the heroine is not a royal sister type, but she just wants to express that the hero truly loves the heroine and is not a substitute for his first love. I think the psychological changes of the hero are very confusing. There should be a process of forgetting first love and a process of liking the heroine. Alas, the so-called pursuit of his wife in the crematorium is actually just a symbolic pursuit by the male protagonist. The female protagonist quickly forgives her, and the person who likes her deeply loses from the beginning.

After reading thirty chapters, it was too uncomfortable and I gave up. A heroine who has no thoughts of her own and is too naive. She has an emotional intelligence of only three years old. She is a girl who makes her heart flutter just by looking at her back. Then she keeps licking her. She knows that others don't like her and are hostile to her, but she goes away when asked without knowing the reason. Do you really not understand that such a person exists in reality? It feels like the author didn't pay attention to the character's personality when creating the characters, and just promoted the plot blindly. Personal opinion, not trolling.

Is it two first loves and two places? May I ask if the male protagonist has any exes or romantic partners?

The protagonist's love is humble. First look at the back, and then look at the character. If you can still love someone with such virtues, you are also a brave person. It can only be said that the heroine Zhou Yu is a yellow cover. I just can't understand this. Not simply.

I don't understand why some authors keep making stupid mistakes and can't remember their own names?? The first chapter talks about the three sons of the Gu family, Gu Yang, Gu Lang, and Gu Xian, but in this chapter the second son is named Gu Tian... Speechless

Well! Can't the heroine be more upbeat?

Why is the heroine so silly and sweet?

Will the ending be a bit sloppy? TTCrying

"Yes" is a big bug for the author~ It's "redeemed"

You accomplished your goal(????)