It's just too short, which makes people a little confused.
. . . What an unexpected ending. . Just a little too fast.
I still don't understand whether this guy likes the heroine or not...
The simple structure and arrangement were obviously not thought through clearly, and the ending was too hasty.
The handling of emotions is childish and the characters are not fleshed out enough.
The foreshadowing was laid, but it was not taken advantage of.
Unable to blend in, too many flaws.
Damn it... Damn it! ! !
After reading it, I found it intriguing
Isn't it very satisfying to leave a paw print~
Seen it, extra points...
=_= He actually died~~Unexpected, unexpected
Great progress, spread the flowers, keep up the good work, this is a good article
It's just too short, which makes people a little confused.
. . . What an unexpected ending. . Just a little too fast.
I still don't understand whether this guy likes the heroine or not...
The simple structure and arrangement were obviously not thought through clearly, and the ending was too hasty. The handling of emotions is childish and the characters are not fleshed out enough. The foreshadowing was laid, but it was not taken advantage of. Unable to blend in, too many flaws.
Damn it... Damn it! ! !
After reading it, I found it intriguing
Isn't it very satisfying to leave a paw print~
Seen it, extra points...
=_= He actually died~~Unexpected, unexpected
Great progress, spread the flowers, keep up the good work, this is a good article