Quick Transmigration: I'm a Scumbag Woman

. . . Is the heroine taking it for granted? She saves people. . . Throw zombies to the male protagonist and then entertain the little girl yourself? A bit baffling.

God, it feels like a tornado. It crackles and blows, and the story is gone. It feels a little slow in the front and too fast in the back.

The little loser talking to the heroine is so cute

Thanks for the great discount, here are some suggestions: 1. The plot does not need to be so compact. A large story is a bit like an outline, and some important plots can be described in appropriate detail. 2. The characters' emotions can be described more delicately. It is recommended that more words be spent on the emotional changes between the male and female protagonists to explain to readers the reasons why the two are attracted to each other. 3. This type of novel can be written in separate volumes. Because in this book, Xingyuan has a different lover in each life, I always feel that Xingyuan does not have deep feelings for the male protagonists, as if he falls in love to complete a task. The above are just some personal thoughts, I hope you can adopt them, and I wish your writing will get better and better (≧▽≦)

If you are interested, please take a look at the advance collection of the sweet article "Nine Thousand Miles of Galaxy". The copy is in the introduction of this article. Please save it~Save the child QVQ

Awesome o(≧v≦)o~~ Come on, make it longer next time

Catching a bug is "an imperial edict"

Each story is a little too short

I still can't tell the difference between the two oil bottles.

I'm so excited... This prime minister just said a few words and ignored you... It's very strange, the plot progresses a bit too fast