The Scum Gong Isn't Scummy Anymore [Quick Transmigration]

Damn, that's it? ? ? Rubbish

Little Nightmare Beast Wuwuwuwuwu

Emmmm ending...

This... This ending is really something I didn't expect, just, very sudden...

Jumping directly to the ending, this is too sad, right? (Shame on the face. Jpg) After helping a few of them, I didn't get anything.

After rewatching it for a long time, I still don't understand why the main character is written to death. Apart from creating a point where the readers cannot feel it, no matter whether the protagonist is required to retrain or be reincarnated... It will basically not have an impact on the plot. The subjects can be sent to be reincarnated, but the main character is deliberately written to death.

After reading it, I can't help but want to say that this idea is actually really novel, but because it is not the path that everyone has always taken, there are many bugs. At least I was troubled by these bugs when I was watching it o(?^`)O 1. The whole article has been emphasizing that this is just a dream, but theoretically speaking, even this dream is based on the memory of Golgoxiaoshou. So how are the contents outside of the memory compiled? If dreams don't begin with memories, then why is it emphasized that attacking can control dreams and be the master of the story? 2. Another thing is that if Gong creates a dream, the master of the dream can completely observe the little Shou outside the dream, and then specially create a person to fulfill the Shou's wish without entering the real body. Assuming that Gong entered the dream specifically because he was too lonely and bored, he can also directly force other people to become better through his abilities. After all, they are just NPCs and not real people. (I know that not doing this is just because without the plot, their novel will have no content. I just think the logic is a bit unreasonable) 3. There is another small point that I am a little concerned about, which is the use of words. The author seems to like to pile two words with similar meanings together, and because of trouble, he does not use commas but uses commas to connect (maybe he is just used to it). There are only two words every time, but no conjunctions such as "and" and "and" are used to connect them, which makes it a bit difficult for me to read. For example: a young man with green hair like a waterfall, a clean and handsome appearance, and "clear and pure" eyes (this is acceptable) "Money, a good life", and Lin Zhibaijian, who has been played by him for several years (I don't know what everyone is like about this, but I watched it several times before I understood it) Because I didn't write the review while reading it, I couldn't find many of the things that made me feel awkward. I could only look through the previous pages to find similar ones, and I wasn't sure if you could understand what I meant. As mentioned before, I think the idea of ​​the article is very new, but the writing is insufficient. The character design has almost no highlights except for the protagonist. It can feel that it is the kind of character that everyone always uses (although the highlight is to slap Su Shuangwen in the face, I just think that the idea is so new, it should be equipped with better characters) I didn't want to write too much at first, but it was inspired by my feelings (it would be great if I could do this in writing) and the ending is QAQ. In short, the author, please continue to work hard!

What the hell? Is the protagonist not yet an adult?

Why not give the little beast a happy ending? I cried to death.

Congratulations on the ending~ This little mythical beast is really good. The ending is a bit cruel. It is still a little cub... It would be better if it could be more satisfactory.