To stay alive, Zhu Fan created one game world after another for the demons.
But while happily exploiting the players, he discovered that he could do more than create game worlds. He could even rewrite reality across the entire world.
Soon, people with supernatural abilities began appearing everywhere.
They called the one who granted them their powers Mr. Z.
But only Zhu Fan knew the truth: "I'm the mastermind behind it all!"
Theme: Writing practice
Well, the development was very good at the beginning, but the break in the middle was too long, and there were obvious gaps. Later, I tended to rush to finish, so I selected a few points of the outline and wrote them in detail. I don't know if it's considered unfinished, but it's a pity. The momentum from the beginning is obviously very good, and it will be very interesting if you write it down well. It's very difficult to find this kind of online game infrastructure article that suits your taste. It's really a pity.
It's a pity. The beginning was pretty good, but the ending was a bit confusing.
The first part of the article is really exciting. I thought it would be a long one. I was still thinking about ending it directly and releasing dozens of chapters at once [laughing and crying]. Now the ending is acceptable. I don't know what to say, so I'll just end it.
It ended really hastily, which is a pity
When I first saw the ending, I thought this book was going to end. But after reading it, it turned out to be pretty good. It was indeed a reasonable plot development. Keep up the good work.
I'm at a loss, and it feels like the ending is so sudden, but the front part is really beautiful!
It's not all finished yet. I think it's good like this in my first work. Although it doesn't show the emotional line (maybe it's because I'm not good at writing?), I feel that sometimes books about God should be like this, leaving some room for imagination. Indifferent bystanders, with the most fanatical believers, believe, and then return to silence. (I can't quite describe it, but actually, I like this book very much. It's not bad. Good luck, author, and take care of yourself)
Well, the protagonist doesn't know anything, and I don't know anything either⊙▽⊙
. . . He actually showed up at the end
Well, I thought of a word - game life, there is no absolute life and death, which is quite ironic, but "destroy" is indeed very simple [come on] [come on]
Well, the development was very good at the beginning, but the break in the middle was too long, and there were obvious gaps. Later, I tended to rush to finish, so I selected a few points of the outline and wrote them in detail. I don't know if it's considered unfinished, but it's a pity. The momentum from the beginning is obviously very good, and it will be very interesting if you write it down well. It's very difficult to find this kind of online game infrastructure article that suits your taste. It's really a pity.
It's a pity. The beginning was pretty good, but the ending was a bit confusing.
The first part of the article is really exciting. I thought it would be a long one. I was still thinking about ending it directly and releasing dozens of chapters at once [laughing and crying]. Now the ending is acceptable. I don't know what to say, so I'll just end it.
It ended really hastily, which is a pity
When I first saw the ending, I thought this book was going to end. But after reading it, it turned out to be pretty good. It was indeed a reasonable plot development. Keep up the good work.
I'm at a loss, and it feels like the ending is so sudden, but the front part is really beautiful!
It's not all finished yet. I think it's good like this in my first work. Although it doesn't show the emotional line (maybe it's because I'm not good at writing?), I feel that sometimes books about God should be like this, leaving some room for imagination. Indifferent bystanders, with the most fanatical believers, believe, and then return to silence. (I can't quite describe it, but actually, I like this book very much. It's not bad. Good luck, author, and take care of yourself)
Well, the protagonist doesn't know anything, and I don't know anything either⊙▽⊙
. . . He actually showed up at the end
Well, I thought of a word - game life, there is no absolute life and death, which is quite ironic, but "destroy" is indeed very simple [come on] [come on]