The Right Way to Open a Sweet Romance

Finished spreading flowers! The last twenty or so chapters of this article look really magical, and it can be seen that it is a very grand setting, but maybe the author did not write a good outline or the writing power is not enough, and it seems a bit like a stream of consciousness. One thing I don't understand is that in Chapter 94, it was said that Jiang Yan informed Fu Xiao to rescue Chi Yang, but later Chi's mother said that she saw Jiang Yan killing someone at the scene, so what's going on? Did Fu Xiao go to save people? Also, I think Chi Tan's death is a bit blurry. If more pens are written on him, he will be a character that people love and hate (the pen was given by my brother and I think the foreshadowing is quite clear). He is the kind of character who obviously loves and cares for this younger brother, but has to go against him for some reasons, and then both like Gypsophila. This struck me, but they are just a very simple brotherhood. Have you forgotten that my brother has a girlfriend? My mother also said that they love each other very much and thought they would get married. So I think it's a bit hasty to simply let him commit suicide because he was set up by his uncle, and a bit sorry for his complicated character. Then I read the comments and why so many people didn't know why even Auntie chose Chi Yang, because Chi Yang could predict the death of others when he was a child (suddenly turned into a supernatural novel), but later he was kidnapped for experiments, and this ability disappeared. All in all, although this article was a bit messy at the end, I still understood it and admire myself!

The more I looked at it, the more fascinated I became. When I saw it later, my expression was like the expression of a subway man looking at his mobile phone. Does Shou's brother like Shou? Who gave me the pen gift? How did Jiang Yan's mother die in the end? Why did Jiang Yan's mother choose Shou? How is Shou's body doing? What did Shou say to Jiang Yan's mother? Nothing is explained clearly. I want to abandon the article, but I also want to know what happens next, but I keep reading, but I can't understand what is being said! This is the most difficult article I have ever read

Personally, I think it's still very good-looking. The world view created by Da Da is very grand, and the perverted settings of all the members are also very interesting. But it seems that the following chapters were written too hastily, and the explanations are not very clear, such as how Yang Yang got the things that affected the medicine out of her body, why there was a smell of blood but no wounds, what happened to Jiang Yan's mother in the end, why she died soon after seeing Yang Yang, etc. But overall it's still good-looking, and the author has a great brain! !

Personally, I think it's still very good-looking. The world view created by Da Da is very grand, and the perverted settings of all the members are also very interesting. But it seems that the following chapters were written too hastily, and the explanations are not very clear, such as how Yang Yang got the things that affected the medicine out of her body, why there was a smell of blood but no wounds, what happened to Jiang Yan's mother in the end, why she died soon after seeing Yang Yang, etc. But overall it's still good-looking, and the author has a great brain! !

You trick people into killing them. Is this a sweet story? This XX must be all perverts. Real food is tasteless and it would be a pity to abandon it.

The emotional line is very annoying and the plot line is too confusing. I will change it next time, dear.

The front is pretty good, but the back unfolds very messily. I personally don't feel the ending is very clear. I feel like the frame is too big but it can't hold it up.

The front looks really good! But! ! Why does it go like this in the future (Black question mark???) It's good to follow the text of the rebirth campus. The sudden change in the painting style in the back is very inconsistent, and it feels like there are many holes that have not been filled in and many lines that have not been completed. In the early stage, it was interesting to watch the interaction between the two male protagonists, but the later interaction was very boring. The more I read the article, the more heartbreaking it became. In the later stage, it took a strange path.

Finished reading. . . Feeling very confused. . . The sudden magical feeling in the later period is not the same as the previous one. . . Although it is not that I have vaguely seen things like experimental products from the previous article, I also have a premonition that they will appear later, but it is too delayed. I just skipped through the last ten chapters. I have a personal subjective feeling, but I was very confused after reading the last twenty chapters. . . I couldn't see what they were doing or saying at all. . . Moreover, Gong Shou's feelings and way of dealing with things are also strange [there's a sense of separation, I can't put it into words]. . . It's not funny, it's not funny, it's not serious, it's so frustrating. [Purely subjective feeling] It doesn't feel too sweet at all. . . Abuse is not abuse. . . At once. . . Plain water? The feeling of eating something tasteless and throwing it away is very strong. . . To be honest, it must be because the copywriting attracts talents to click in, but I don't know if I want to increase the depth or if I want to write too many jokes that are all blended together and look nondescript. . Moreover, the relationship issues that the two people should resolve are postponed until very late, and the attitude of the two people towards human life is also very strange [it's not a setting problem, it just feels very awkward]. At first I thought it was campus writing, but then I moved to the entertainment industry, and then I became more organized in science, technology, medicine, and so on. . . Is it really up to high school students (college students) to save this world? ? ? [Although I know they are adults after being reborn, it feels very awkward] It's very fragmented! Very! I hope that I can better arrange the plot and write better articles in the future. . . Ah! I don't even know what I want to say. . . I feel so uncomfortable!

Ahhhhhh, I want to continue being sweet! ! !