Both stories were completed around 2002, old drafts…
One sweet, one bittersweet. Both are equally amateurish, so proceed with caution if that’s not your thing :)
■ Good Morning, Darling
Darling, this may not be the best way to meet again, but at least we’ve seen each other once more.
Darling, we didn’t understand each other back then, so we missed out on so much. I really wish I’d spent more time with you.
Darling, maybe even back then, I already wanted to call you that.
■ Love Came Back Once
It wasn’t until much later, one day, as I sat in front of my computer late at night,
and found my eyes inexplicably reddening over a song, that I finally understood:
Love had come back once, in that ambiguous winter.
Premise:
The second story is a bit regretful~
I wanted to see if there were any new articles in DaDa, but I didn't find any. I was disappointed.
When will you write a new article?
Luoluoluoshao. . . . .
Instant Pot
Reminds me of Lipton's instant milk tea ORZ = =
Actually...
It's not just that person who can accompany you through life...
I think both of these two articles are very well written.
But...
I read what [too full to eat] said
It feels like that...
But I actually envy the first heroine...
Not because of the male protagonist
But friends...
Watching the big version of "Suiyun Moli" makes me feel very good
Even if you haven't read the original work (showing contempt for me...)
But I am a person
I have never been in the habit of reading articles and leaving comments.
Although I also know that this is unfair to the author
But I really don't want to interrupt reading the article
So
Please understand...
However
I will still wait until I finish reading and leave a long comment...
[O(∩_∩)O~ I dare not give a long review, for fear of falling short...]
O(∩_∩)O~
Very beautiful...
Could it be your personal experience?
Support the great writing style! ! !
What an excellent essay. Da Da's writing style is delicate and his skills are good.
From the post...
First of all, I'd like to say sorry. I really read this article from beginning to end and I like it very much, but... Sister, two chapters, two independent stories, totaling about 10,000 words, you asked me to write a long review. I'm afraid you will be angry if I write it - this is not just a combination of words! It's my fault too. I only mentioned the upper limit but not the lower limit. Please forgive me~~
After reading the first story, I didn't feel very good about the heroine in the article. Because of her poor family background, she looked so fragile that she would be beaten to death at any time, but in fact she was quite domineering. It seemed that it was right for the hero to consider everything for her. However, in life, even if two people fall in love, they will always have conflicts. If they cannot tolerate each other and fall in love, their relationship will not go far. Especially the female protagonist's friend is even more interesting. Even if the male protagonist's unintentional actions make the female protagonist uncomfortable, that's their business. It's really annoying for this woman to lecture the male protagonist with the look of a messenger of justice. Can it be considered a fault if someone is from a good family? As long as the man thinks about the woman blindly, what about the heroine herself? In other words, is the heroine like a dodder, unable to live on her own without a support?
After reading the second story, the male protagonist in the article made me feel uncomfortable again. He is also a hurt person. Can't he understand the hesitation in the female protagonist's heart? The heroine regrets her hesitation, but forgets the hero's indifference. A man who won't fight for you in the face of his opponent, he actually doesn't love you enough!
Both of the author's stories are quite profound and worth pondering~~
By the way, after reading this article, I was still unsatisfied. I took a look at the author's column and found out that the author was writing about Chu Liuxiang fandom... Haha~~ Although I don't read fanfic very much, but as someone who likes martial arts and handsome people, I want to shake hands~~
The second story is a bit regretful~ I wanted to see if there were any new articles in DaDa, but I didn't find any. I was disappointed. When will you write a new article?
Luoluoluoshao. . . . .
Instant Pot Reminds me of Lipton's instant milk tea ORZ = =
Actually... It's not just that person who can accompany you through life... I think both of these two articles are very well written. But... I read what [too full to eat] said It feels like that... But I actually envy the first heroine... Not because of the male protagonist But friends... Watching the big version of "Suiyun Moli" makes me feel very good Even if you haven't read the original work (showing contempt for me...) But I am a person I have never been in the habit of reading articles and leaving comments. Although I also know that this is unfair to the author But I really don't want to interrupt reading the article So Please understand... However I will still wait until I finish reading and leave a long comment... [O(∩_∩)O~ I dare not give a long review, for fear of falling short...]
O(∩_∩)O~ Very beautiful...
Could it be your personal experience?
Support the great writing style! ! !
What an excellent essay. Da Da's writing style is delicate and his skills are good.
From the post... First of all, I'd like to say sorry. I really read this article from beginning to end and I like it very much, but... Sister, two chapters, two independent stories, totaling about 10,000 words, you asked me to write a long review. I'm afraid you will be angry if I write it - this is not just a combination of words! It's my fault too. I only mentioned the upper limit but not the lower limit. Please forgive me~~ After reading the first story, I didn't feel very good about the heroine in the article. Because of her poor family background, she looked so fragile that she would be beaten to death at any time, but in fact she was quite domineering. It seemed that it was right for the hero to consider everything for her. However, in life, even if two people fall in love, they will always have conflicts. If they cannot tolerate each other and fall in love, their relationship will not go far. Especially the female protagonist's friend is even more interesting. Even if the male protagonist's unintentional actions make the female protagonist uncomfortable, that's their business. It's really annoying for this woman to lecture the male protagonist with the look of a messenger of justice. Can it be considered a fault if someone is from a good family? As long as the man thinks about the woman blindly, what about the heroine herself? In other words, is the heroine like a dodder, unable to live on her own without a support? After reading the second story, the male protagonist in the article made me feel uncomfortable again. He is also a hurt person. Can't he understand the hesitation in the female protagonist's heart? The heroine regrets her hesitation, but forgets the hero's indifference. A man who won't fight for you in the face of his opponent, he actually doesn't love you enough! Both of the author's stories are quite profound and worth pondering~~ By the way, after reading this article, I was still unsatisfied. I took a look at the author's column and found out that the author was writing about Chu Liuxiang fandom... Haha~~ Although I don't read fanfic very much, but as someone who likes martial arts and handsome people, I want to shake hands~~
I like short stories like this~~