May Your Wish Come True (Quick Transmigration)

I can understand every sentence, but when I put them together, I don't know what they are talking about... It's all in the fog.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but every story seems to be confusing, the protagonist's emotions seem to be light and bland, and then each world is not explained clearly and the ending feels so confusing.

Wasn't it all because of this bitch that Asu was beaten? Why was he humming?!

?? Why doesn't the plot match?

I feel a bit like the writing style I used to write on Hanabi. The writing style is still very good.

What suddenly occurred to me was a story about fast time travel. Hunting slaves was a pastime of the ancient powerful. But as modern people, we would think this was very cruel and unethical. We can only condemn and dislike the ancient people. However, the heroine, as a fast traveler, is still excited by hunting slaves. It really cannot be defined by "not being a good person". What is the difference between being a scumbag and the reader's perspective is that of the heroine. It is really disgusting.

So what's the use of the heroine dying?

Hahahahaha lsp Asu

The more Lin Ye looks at him, the more he looks like today's elementary school boy 2333

I have no idea what you are writing about in your first story.