In the Name of the Sea King [Worldbuilding]

Ah? I seemed lonely

So is this new queen the original Poseidon? It's hard to understand, but at least Peis is still alive, in another form.

Although, there are too many regrets. The infrastructure elements are not very late either. But I still like it very much, looking forward to the second part!

What does this have to do with infrastructure?

This is a mess...

Weird, so weird. It feels like I wanted to read a fairy tale but was stuffed with a fairy tale. After reading the whole thing, I feel a little disconnected.

I think there is a hint that Pesce was swallowed, and her being swallowed is the most logical thing in this article. To sum up, I think it is best not to change. Pace doesn't have to survive to prove anything. In fact, the protagonist doesn't have to survive to the end. The key depends on the development of this story line.

An abrupt end, an unexpected ending? ? ? What is this?

So is it an open ending? . . To be honest, I am still a little bit upset, because I have always regarded Pace as invincible and the smartest, so I always thought that Pace would definitely win, but when I saw Otto's words at the end, I hesitated. In this chapter, the description of Neptune also said "there is novelty and excitement there." Maybe Pace lost, maybe Pace and "God" were combined. . . (Obviously I have a lot to say, but in the end I don't know how to conceive the language QAQ, so let's just blow it off) Queen Pace, I love you forever! ! ! ! ! This feeling of being a villain (maybe not?) Is so charming! ! ! The author writes well! ! ! But it still felt short, and some places were hurriedly taken through. Sometimes I had the thought of "Oh, so that's it... Eh?!! Why did it suddenly go here?!" (Maybe it's because I'm not smart enough). So please feel free to open the second part! ! ! I'm going to buy it all! ! ! ! !

Well written and well set up. But it got a bit boring around the last 80 chapters. But it's still a very good article. Sharp