Xin Ziyan, a third-rate actor, was reborn as a rich young master after an accident.
WTF? You're saying this young master has congenital heart disease?
Xin Ziyan: "No problem. I can sprint a hundred meters in one go."
You're saying this young master is good for nothing but his looks?
Xin Ziyan: "No problem. Even if I'm just a pretty face, I'm the most distinctive one around."
You're saying someone has taken a fancy to him?
Xin Ziyan: "No problem. I've got the looks, he's got the money. How does that saying go?"
Matchmaking is all decided by fate.
Hey, that's not wrong.
Story break
Here's the blurb for Banging into a Brick Wall. If you're interested, check it out in my author page and give it a bookmark~
Ye Wenchuan is a cool, refined gentleman, yet he has a face that makes hearts flutter. All sorts of butterflies come around to test the waters, only to be slapped down before they can get close. People say behind his back that flirting with Ye Wenchuan is like running into an iron wall: one collision and you're dead.
Han Fengming, however, isn't afraid to die. While drunk, he clings tightly to Ye Wenchuan and refuses to let go. Everyone nearby is enjoying the spectacle, but to their surprise, Ye Wenchuan picks Han Fengming up and strides away. As he leaves, he even says, "Good boy."
Everyone is dumbfounded...
Han Fengming (hands on hips): "I ran into the wall and got to hold the man, too. So, how impressive am I?"
Ye Wenchuan (calmly): "I believe in you."
Theme: Love
Emmm It's sweet, but it feels very bland when you look at it. A small suggestion to the author, when writing, pay attention to making the skeleton fuller. This means that the author's writing feels to me like an assembly line product with only a skeleton. You can make some plots more fleshed out, especially in the psychological and emotional changes of the characters. Sometimes, although language can express a person's feelings very well, other times it is indifferent. In the process of writing, you should appropriately add some psychological changes of the characters and their attitudes towards certain things. You can also add some introductions about certain things to make the narrative more complete and the storyline richer and more interesting. The frame is important, but in the process of writing a novel, it is not just the big frame, but the small branches that can promote the development of the storyline. The characters in the novel have souls. What kind of character this person is and what kind of things this character will do can be expressed psychologically. Or you can appropriately use some aspects such as profile description, that is, through other characters' attitudes towards the protagonist's certain things, or psychological description. Some small suggestions are already great. Good luck to the author for the next one!
My wife's cookies are great! It's really comfortable to have a smooth journey. Although it doesn't seem to have that sense of ups and downs of comedy, the IQs of both the attack and the end are online, and the plot is reasonable and reasonable. It's really good! It just feels like I pressed fast forward in the second half. After reading the full text, it's the script written by Emperor Chang Ning that impressed me even more.
I think this dirty information is a bit embarrassing. Doesn't it say that the protagonist is the adopted son of the Xin family? Then he still needs to find the sponsor
Great writing!!!! I just want to give some small suggestions on writing~ You can probably delete some details appropriately. For example, when taking the makeup photos, there is no need to describe the style of each character's makeup photos that have nothing to do with the plot. There are also a lot of emotional lines that can be smoothed out a little more, and then some more psychological descriptions of attack and reception~ It's just my personal opinion, it's great!!! The story is very sweet, come on!
Good-looking(??ω??)??
It looks good, although it feels a bit fast.
I ended up scattering flowers, a little bit reluctant to leave.
This is too pampering! Anyone who touches my hair will be killed!