My next romance novel is You Love That Green Tea Girl Instead. Please add it to your collection!!!
Announcement: This novel has no CP! And the so-called substitute isn't like the usual kind! The scum will absolutely get what's coming to them, so don't worry!
Synopsis:
He said Hua Jin's eyes looked like Fu Zhen's;
He said Hua Jin's mouth looked like Fu Zhen's;
He said Hua Jin's smile looked like Fu Zhen's;
They said Hua Jin was just a substitute.
Everyone in the Piaomiao Sect knew Hua Jin was a substitute, someone to soothe their consciences after their beloved Senior Sister Fu Zhen, the sect's "white moonlight," disappeared.
What no one in the Piaomiao Sect knew was that they were all just substitutes in Hua Jin's heart, too.
One day, the real one came back.
So, who had really used whom?
Reader's guide:
1. Fake angst + punishing the scum.
2. There are clues planted throughout, and the female lead is sweet on the outside but dark within.
Upcoming novel synopsis:
The Substitute Lover of the Emperor's Favorite is an angst-filled romance novel full of melodrama.
The heroine, Yan Xi, is practically the definition of tragedy.
She and her younger sister Yan Jin are twins, but their parents have always favored Yan Jin, who is frail and has heart disease.
She accidentally saved the male lead, Ling Feng, and he promised to repay her. But her younger sister Yan Jin stole the credit.
Yan Jin was thirsty? Yan Xi's fault.
Yan Jin was tired? Yan Xi's fault.
Even when Yan Jin died of a heart attack after wanting to meet Ling Feng, it was still Yan Xi's fault.
Unable to let go of his love for Yan Jin, Ling Feng married Yan Xi, who had always loved him, and made her Yan Jin's substitute.
But he also hated Yan Xi for Yan Jin's death and tormented her in every way.
After a series of melodramatic scenes that tormented Yan Xi emotionally and physically, Ling Feng finally learned the truth about everything that had happened. He found out who had saved him back then and realized he'd been in love with the wrong person all along.
At last, the two of them got their happy ending.
When Yan Jin woke up from a nap, she had become the green tea female supporting character in the angst-filled melodrama she'd been reading before she fell asleep.
She looked up at Yan Xi, the heroine who looked just like her and whose face was filled with concern.
She weakly covered her heart.
"Sis, don't blame Brother Ling Feng. He didn't mean to push me."
"Sis, does Brother Ling Feng not like it when I cling to you?"
"Sis, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to interrupt your date."
Looking at the stunning beauty who was flustered because of her, and the male lead who was increasingly hated by the heroine, Yan Jin smiled sweetly.
That dog of a man can get lost. Big Sis is all that matters!
Completed no-CP novels with female leads: Becoming the Heroine's Life Mentor: Quick Transmigration and The System Keeps Trying to Bind Me [Quick Transmigration]. Feel free to ask me about them~
Theme: Everyone deserves to exist as an independent person
It looked so nerve-wracking at the beginning, but in the end, this is it? It's too bland, right?
I didn't feel anything special after watching the finale. I don't know what to say.
First of all, let me state that I am not a fan! After reading it, the author's writing style is undoubtedly good, but it just feels too bland. After knowing the ending, I felt like, oh, that's it. And actually, I don't mean that I like to read cool novels, but in general, the heroine in the novel always has to have advantages and advantages. In this article, I feel that the heroine has always been mediocre, not like a heroine, and there are really no memorable points in the article. For example, other articles will have: a certain secret realm is very exciting, the heroine's mortal life is flesh and blood, the heroine's personality is very unique and so on. But when I look back after reading the entire book, it's really a blank. I know that the article describes the heroine as cold and good-looking, but I feel that it is not integrated into the book and there is too little writing. Also based on my previous comments, other people's writing progress is gradual. This article feels like the progress is 0%.0%.10%.10%.50%.50%.100%, Or even 0%.10%.70%.100%. All in all, the heroine's development period, glorious period, and climax period are all missing from the previous ones. In the end, I only wrote two or three chapters, and then it stopped suddenly, and it was gone. It felt a bit suffocating to watch. I really feel that the author has good writing style and good ideas, but he can throw in more clues in the future and let us follow along.
The long comment I finally typed was deleted because I couldn't comment on it. It pissed me off, so I'll type it again. It is not easy for the author to write an article. We all know this. I am not looking for fault, but I really want the author to know what I think is wrong with this article. The introduction says that this is a cool article, and it is an anti-substitute article that does not follow ordinary routines. This setting is very attractive and there is nothing wrong with it. If you want to write a short story, that is no problem. But in the first 58 chapters, you let the heroine be bullied into such a cowardly manner. When bullied, she would think silently in her heart, "Well, I will slap them in the face in the future. What is the difference between this and self-comfort?" I pulled out Gong's soul and felt a little bit of her rise, but what was the result? In the last chapter, all the foreshadowing and reasons are thrown out, and then everyone dies together!??? It's very baffling and too sudden. It feels like the ending is just like your original outline, just to give readers an explanation and an ending. Are you anxious to write other articles? Is it really rushed, too hasty, or did you fail to arrange the layout of the entire article? It's cumbersome at the beginning but rushed at the end, or is it too much foreshadowing and the writing collapses in the end? Maybe I have too high requirements for the author. Your imagination is very attractive, but I really hope you can write this setting well.
Is the mysterious man in the demon world the dark side of Fu Zhen?
I am the author of this article. I saw some little angels' reactions and did not understand it. I am very sorry for this. It was because of me that I did not tell the story clearly, so I will re-edit the article for the finale of this chapter, and then add an extra chapter about the entire story of Hua Jin. This chapter is currently awaiting high review and cannot be changed, so I will tell you about it here. I'm so sorry<(_ _)>
Ccccc, Fu is really dark, Hua Jin is bright
Hey, that's it. No wonder these people are so hard to explain.
I feel like the ending is a bit too fast and I can't get enough of it.
Hold the grass... I have such a big brain