Dare You Mess with My Possessive Boyfriend? [Book Transmigration]

It's a bit... Awkward. I didn't expect to see retro style in this era. It's...

I feel like the heroine is a bit green tea

How should I put it? The points in a basic basketball game won't be that small.

All my money has been withdrawn and I'm waiting to see it.

I feel that the introduction is very attractive, but after reading it, I feel a little childish? It is not suitable for my ten-year-old aunt.

Arrogance and madness appear so frequently.

What you write is still very readable, and the main line is quite clear. You will write better and better in the future, come on^0^~

Many of the details in this book are so good~ For example, if you cut your bangs, you will transform from an ordinary girl into a class beauty--the effect is better than makeup and plastic surgery. For example, as soon as you become beautiful, you will immediately receive a lot of admiring looks when you walk on campus - as long as the beauty is not earth-shattering, passers-by will only look at you a few more times. Who would admire a strange girl just because she is beautiful? For example, when the heroine moves books, she will be very tired after six books, and she won't be able to move ten books. What kind of book is this? It's so heavy.

I'm a little confused. I don't seem to be able to explain why the male protagonist likes the female protagonist. Because her eyes look like the male protagonist's mother? What about the male protagonist's father? Can the male protagonist still play basketball? Where is the original heroine? It feels a little less interesting, but this ending seems to work. I hope it can be improved in the later episodes.

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