Big Brother Says Come Home and Take Your Medicine [Book Transmigration]

2020.8.7 I've finished reading it~ Generally speaking, this is an article that makes people feel very happy and comfortable after reading it. 1) Plot The identity of Gong Shou is actually quite complex, including the entire background of cultivating immortals. The author did not leave too much text here, but mainly focused on the daily description of the plot, outlining the logic of the entire story. There is no big problem with the overall logic of the article. It is more about daily life and has a very warm feeling. It is very happy for cookie lovers. 2) Feelings In terms of love, the love between Gong and Shou can only be said to be very warm. Although the emotional line between Gong and Shou has always been there, it can be said that Gong's goal has always been very clear. Most of Gong's pursuit of his wife is his own. But everyone knows that Gong has an agenda against Shou, including Shou himself. It is inevitable to be together, and it should not be just about their interest. However, the love between attack and reception is a bit bland among all the characters' emotions. Personally, I feel that the love for the younger generation like Master and Master in the article is greater than the description of love between attack and acceptance. But overall, it's still sweet and not a bit sadistic. It's the kind of movie that makes you feel comfortable and makes you smile after watching it. I really enjoyed watching other relationships, such as the master-disciple relationship! It's very cute and you can tell that it was written with great care! Read the article for details! Sisters who like comfortable plots don't miss it! 3) Characters The characters written by the author all have their own characteristics, and there is no cookie-cutter feel. It can be seen that the settings related to the characters have been carefully considered. The interaction inside the teacher's gate is really cute and fun! It really creates a scene where the whole family is happy There is no bloody story between each character. The protagonists are all harmonious and beautiful, the kind of real protagonists who could write a novel just by picking them out. The villain is the kind of person who, just by looking at it, is the three-part box lunch in a certain cultivation stream. (It was the plot that made them finish the whole book) 4) Disadvantages ① There are a lot of typos, which makes reading not smooth. It is recommended that the author come back and fix the typos in the article when he has nothing to do. ②The ending of the plot seems a bit difficult. It takes a lot of ink to write the causes and consequences, which makes it a bit difficult to read. It is recommended that the author start to make more obvious foreshadowing in the middle of the article. ③The connection part of the plot is slightly abrupt. It can be seen that it is intended to connect, but it is a bit deliberate. It feels like we can start the next scene. Regarding the rhythm of the plot, I still recommend that the author think more carefully. This article has a feeling that everything has been taken into account, but it is not outstanding. 5) Summary: After reading this article as a whole, the most comforting feeling for me was that it made me feel that the author who wrote such an article should be a very gentle person. The daily life is very warm, and I really love the small interactions between teachers and students! It doesn't feel like a running account, so it's suitable for those who like to watch a more relaxed and sweet version.

Which two cubs are holding hands? [Excited eyes. Jpg]

I haven't seen such a light-hearted and sweet article in a long time! So excited, the writing is so good! Big confession!

Hahahaha, no time, ruthless senior brother

The person in the room, senior brother. Can we look forward to the joint registration ceremony?

I just want to know what happened to the thunder tribulation after my senior brother turned to alchemy cultivation.

So will the eldest sister kidnap the third junior sister? (

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, how can they be stuck here?

Is it over? I still don't understand something. Yan Huai's physique allows him to hear other people's voices. What about Rong Yan's physique? What is it?

The main plot is quite interesting, but it's too much talk. Many places have been explained before and will have to be explained several times later. After reading it once and knowing the plot, I have no desire to read it again.