[Harry Potter] Eternal Life

First of all, the settings are pretty good. But it can't change the flaw: The male protagonist pretends to be unrepentant. He clearly killed the female protagonist. I thought he would really chase his wife to the crematorium. However, after the female protagonist returned, he took it for granted that the female protagonist owed him. What a shameless man. ??♀? The heroine is a fairy. I can understand that she is a virgin. She has lived in vain for nine thousand and eight hundred years. No matter how ignorant she is of the world, she is not so stupid and sweet: the first time she came to earth, she was raped by the male protagonist (without power); the second time she lost her memory and was raped by Abu (Lucius's father). ) Seduces Jian, and then he immediately finds out that Abu has a wife and is pregnant. Even if the man says he wants a divorce, it will not change that she is a mistress... And later the male protagonist comes to entangle her again, and the relationship between them is like a rotten rag stuck together by a few pieces of solidified oil. ? As for children, it is women who are really bound by children, not men. The male protagonist said he doesn't want children, but the female protagonist still wants to give birth... After giving birth, the female protagonist dies. After many years, the female protagonist comes back again. She loses her memory → recovers her memory → becomes entangled. The female protagonist pays every step of the way for the child, and she does pay, but the child and his father set a trap for the female protagonist... What is the difference between this and a white-eyed wolf? ? I really agree with that sentence, why ancient Chinese mythology does not allow gods to fall in love. "Gods should love everyone." Otherwise, for the sake of petty love, they will not abide by their duties and be unfair to all living beings. ??? The female protagonist went to Hogwarts and was hurt many times by many, many, many people. She thought that the male protagonist punished someone too lightly. If it were her, it would be even worse. But the result... As a god, a being who is more powerful when she has magic power, she really disgraced the heaven. Also, the male protagonist stabbed her with his own hands, but she still didn't regret it, and even passed her magic power to him... I made people 1. Speechless. ? As for OOC, it is indeed unavoidable, but maybe the author is still young and doesn't know much about the characters in HP. For example, as pure bloods, they are all proud and arrogant. Most of them will not lower their status and will not give up family interests for love. But in order to create multiple "female competitions" and "male competitions"... To create the heart-throb characteristics of the male and female protagonists, these supporting roles were reduced. ?? In addition, the male protagonist no longer has the right to be feared and dare not be nominated. The overall growth of the characters has not been reflected, and the time planning of the plot is not very good. So many things have happened, it seems that countless days and nights have passed, and I am still in fifth grade... ? Finally, a lot of time has passed since the author finished reading this article. The characters in the story need to grow, and so does the author.

The heroine is so in love, I feel like Erlangshen seeing his sister insisting on running away with a mortal. Little Tom is not as good as Agarwood, but he has a crooked top beam and a crooked bottom beam. The gods are emotional and the three realms are restless!!! I don't believe that I can't stop this thought of others!! Voldemort is such a good thing. I was so angry after watching the extra episode. I might as well kill Voldemort and be with Abu, even though he is not a good person either. The heroine's love-brained behavior is outrageous, and this child must be born.

A reminder for those who come in later to read the article: What the author says in the introduction is the truth, and he is not just writing it casually to scare you! So if you are not interested in those settings, you really should be cautious! You may be dismissed or have a heart attack due to the following: 1. The opening setting is rather ancient. At the beginning, a Chinese god descends to the HP world, and the screen is opened by Tom QJ. 2. The heroine comes with her own peach blossom body fragrance, and Tom releases a green light at the heroine in front of a lot of students at school (crooked? Azkaban warning) 3. The second male lead in the extra story, Abu, knows how to play the third in the line:-) 4. In the early stage, ancient sayings and modern ways of speaking were mixed together. If you can't accept it, don't force yourself. I didn't finish reading this article completely. I read the first three chapters + the ending + the first three chapters of the extra chapter, and I was hurt by the above setting~ It can be seen that the writing skills of the author's wife are actually very good, but can we optimize the setting of the novel? I cried. I really want to see my wife write some HP fanfics with normal settings and no fuss~

How can I say that the gods in China are all descended from humans, so there is no such thing as gods envying mortals. After all, he chose to become an immortal himself, and becoming an immortal is not the end of it. ?

Gee, this woman has Stockholm Syndrome.

Although, the more I think about it, the angrier I get! Depend on! Does Tom really not like the heroine at all? I don't believe it, I don't believe it, I don't believe it!

Just when I wanted to continue watching regardless of the heroine's silly, sweet and love-minded character, the plot continued to collapse. Help, what are these three views? Knowing three things and doing three things is really a waste of time.

That's outrageous. Why do you say you like Tom and yet remain ambiguous with Malfoy? They kissed and hugged each other, so disgusting

To avoid a minor surprise, everything the author says in the copy is true. Those who recommend Voldemort, those who love pure love, those who love plot, those who like to sort out emotional lines subconsciously, those who are a little more realistic with the plot, or who add a bit of morality to analyze the characters, are all recommended to take a detour. One thing I have to say is that I have never seen this plot in a book. The author is very imaginative. If you really want to read it (after all, the author's writing style is really good), I suggest you read it from the beginning to the first two or thirty chapters of the extra chapter. It won't have much impact.

All I can say is that it's you, Tom, and it's worthy of my fear that Tom was acting. It's true.