[Enemy/Fa Zheng II] The Way Home

To be honest, I just wanted to challenge myself. I've never tried writing a professional detective story before... *cough* But I'm sure that won't hide the fact that I'm not a professional. So if you're an expert, feel free to skim it; no need to take it too seriously (gets beaten up). But if you spot any mistakes and would kindly point them out, I'd be grateful. Think of it as a chance for me to learn something! XD