I Found Out My Bunkmate Was Using My Name to Write □□ Stories

Unexpectedly! The real Zhihu is here hahahaha! These two short chapters really reflect the strong Zhihu style. . . It felt quite eye-catching, and then I looked at it carefully and felt that I had some small thoughts that I wanted to share. First of all, some of the logic connections are not very good. The "careless character" at the end of the first chapter and the earlier part of it are not connected when I watched my roommate write a small X text and I thought he had a different sexual orientation. If I were writing (Dense Fog), I would want to make Gong stunned. I instantly recalled that my roommate's hand attack in the computer class was called "hand speed training", and then connected it together [Gan! This guy has gone too far. He usually pretends to have no desires but secretly begs for dissatisfaction. He just hides and practices self-sufficiency. He just doesn't share the good things he has. He even directly copy and paste his name to fill the gap! It's good for him, he's so lazy that he doesn't even want to move his hands! (Funny) (Look at the pun, hahaha)]. Then, in the first chapter, it can be said that Gong was just panicked and confused. Secondly, I feel that there are some things that I don't need to say myself. For example, the first point is about "careless character". I just asked him to talk to himself in the first person in this paragraph. Isn't it that all the characters are reflected? ^3^ This kind of summary language is quietly crushed and reflected in the plot through details, so that the reader can only understand the unspeakable ~ It belongs to the character outline written by the author in the draft rather than the character details in writing. Next, it's the details, details, details, details, details, details, details, details, details, the smaller, more rounded, and less directly facing, the more interesting they are. For example, if I were to write it (Sorry, I am a peddler), and my roommate found out that he was lying to me, he would just lie and blurt out, "You didn't even ask your brother to rub your shoulders and give you a late-night snack when you were working on this paper in the middle of the night. I really can't bear it!" . Then the content of the first chapter is to attack netizens and ask if the roommate is still the same roommate as before, and the second chapter is to use methods to test things... This is another chapter full of useful information! (The dog's head saves life) Then, to be honest, some of the language is not very consistent with the identity of the character, such as "the moment when the eyes meet", "so annoying", "slender waist and long legs", "peach blossom eyes are like hooks", it feels like a girl says this. Since Gong is acting like a straight man in front, straight men generally don't have such psychological thoughts! [It's so annoying] = [I couldn't figure it out. I was so worried that I took out a cigarette, took a puff, put it out, and built a 2D stick figure directly on the table]. Doesn't this feel more appropriate? ^^ Finally, since you have already gone all over Zhihu, and the anonymous feature has been passed down from generation to generation, how can you not talk about the endless emergence of bars and tendons in detail, and point out the country out of thin air? I want to be the gods in the comment area! The kind of ignorant scholar who doesn't even read the article and just prints out the concepts and can win over a building, the kind of aunt who lives in the house for your good, the kind of hypothetical patient who is satisfied with me, of course, there are also the hidden Vs who have a sharp point, or the hermits who patiently enlighten you for their reasons... Therefore, I feel that the outline is not very good, and I don't know what to write later.

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