Ongoing novel: Becoming a Landlady in a Period Novel
Tong Siyu is a habitual transmigrator. She went from a girl of the new era who grew up under the red flag, to a useless outer disciple in a cultivation world, and finally became a background character in a book called Sweet Love in the Seventies.
Tong Siyu says modestly that she’s used to it.
But what is going on with this book’s plot?! Her bargain-basement father, Tong Zhengguo, dies of depression after becoming disabled in both legs. Her bargain-basement mother, Zhou Ying, works herself to death on the job. Her unlucky younger brother goes into business overseas, gets cheated, and ends up begging on the streets.
As for Tong Siyu herself, ha! She marries young to a mama’s boy, with a vicious mother-in-law to boot, and is forced to have a string of children. At thirty, she looks like a woman in her fifties or sixties...
A certain plant reverberates in 3D around Tong Siyu’s mind. She decides to kick this rotten plot to the curb, roll up her sleeves, and make her fortune. She’ll buy up hillsides, dig fishponds, and go into business. Tong Siyu will achieve her ultimate dream from two lifetimes ago: becoming an honorable landlady!
Little skit: Lu Jici spots a house in the capital, where his wife is attending university. He plans to spend all the money he’s saved from his years in the army to buy it for her as a surprise, only to discover it’s too expensive for him.
Later, when his wife takes him to see the house, he realizes that he’s the real clown. It turns out his wife is the rich one!
P.S. The heroine has a huge golden finger (the author is obsessed with pocket dimensions).
Novel blurb
Blurb 1: A food blogger transmigrates and finds herself in a desolate primitive society. Fortunately, a little bug from the heavens drops into her lap. Let’s see how she uses her pocket dimension to develop the community and guide her tribe to prosperity. Blurb 2: Everyone says transmigrating is great, but Ge Wan thinks ending up in primitive times might not be so wonderful. Luckily, she gets the standard golden finger, and her mutated pocket dimension is truly amazing. Today she discovers some little chestnuts, tomorrow she grows a field of rice. Life in primitive times isn’t so hard to endure after all! She meant to focus on her career, but there’s always a man who won’t leave her alone... Life isn’t easy. Ge Wan sighs. What can she do? She can’t kill him, so she might as well keep him.
Theme: The struggle to build a life after transmigrating to primitive times.
After reading so much, I can't help but want to say a few words. There are too many flaws to start with. Really, the more I read this article, the more I want to laugh. Since you have chosen this original subject, the most basic way of dialogue must be in line with the current level of historical and cultural development. For a primitive tribe, the writing has not yet become popular and needs totem marks to identify it. You can give me an idiom every minute, and you can give me some literate dialogue every minute. Do you think this is reasonable? There is also the character setting of the heroine. She was inexplicably transported into this social environment. Did she blend in too naturally and quickly? And since the heroine mentioned in the previous chapters realized that the reason for her time travel was related to the wizard or the witch doctor, why did she wait for the other party to come to her instead of taking the initiative to find the reason? Isn't she too passive? The timeline of the full text is also written very quickly, and it is too concise and omitted. If you look carefully, you will find that from the beginning to this chapter, the heroine discovered a kind of thorn fruit before going to winter to satisfy her hunger. Good guy, she has not made any other major contributions during the whole writing process and she is about to become the leader's wife. You can't catch the train that fast, right? There are too many other points that I don't want to comment on one by one, it would be too tiring. In short, I don't know what other readers think. Anyway, after seeing this, I have no desire to read anymore, and I still hope that the author can use some caution!
Is it okay to let the bad guys die immediately? Even if there's a new bad guy coming later, I don't want to be so sloppy.
Why didn't the male protagonist confiscate the thermos bottle and knife he had on Lie when he was taken into custody? And why was it that it was Lie who concealed Zhuang's death from the heroine and took the knife?
Didi, I will finish the paper today and will make up for it tomorrow~
Hahahahaha am I that fierce? (Raised eyebrows) I'm embarrassed to say what you said, but I want to tell you one thing. Our school will actually start on May 6th, and you won't be able to go home on the weekends. Then you will have a holiday after the sub-exam in July, so you won't be able to accompany you for about two months qaq In fact, as a senior in high school, I am under a lot of pressure, so I occasionally go to JJ and read articles to lighten my mood. In fact, it's really fun to read a big book when I'm tired every day ~ Pen Refill It's a pity that the next time I see you is during the summer vacation when school starts. I must keep updating~ Come on, come on
Friends, believe me, I really don't want to be a pigeon! School is about to start, but I found that the paper for a class has not been touched yet. I rushed to finish the paper and was bald. The next update date will be updated twice, and I will make up for it at once. You must believe me - (sincere and guilty eyes). I have been looking for the leave request for a long time and I can't find it, so I will tell you in the comment area.
Are you proud of yourself? (Squints eyes) Speaking of which, Yang is tanned like an African... I don't dare to think about it, I can't imagine... Yang should be a yellow race. If he takes off his clothes, the picture will be a bit beautiful.
After doing several somersaults... Emm suddenly got a picture (laughing and crying) Come on~
Spread the flowers, come on ww
Ah ship! I feel like the guys in JJ have almost ruined (farming) (raining) (pipa row) [spreading hands]