Dark Waters, Red Bamboo

One word is light, as light as white water. 2 Points for encouragement.

Fill in the points :) Come on and write

Why don't you continue writing? I like it very much_ Looking forward to the following

Very well written! There is a trace of sadness floating in the light text, which is well interpreted from the third person perspective. Isn't your article not finished yet? Keep writing! I can see that you are a very thoughtful person!

The nameplate is too wordy? Looking at it again, it is indeed true. But I also feel that it would be a bit abrupt if I skip it directly. Is there any better way to turn it around? To be honest, I also feel that it is very lengthy and boring to show all the characters in one go. But in the past, when I read articles, I felt that the step-by-step character descriptions were not enough. That's why I wanted to try a different approach, but it seems like my method is a little worse. Regarding this, I would like if you could provide some opinions if possible, as long as you feel what kind of form makes people feel what kind of point of view. In addition, Zangetsu is very smart, is he also from Zhuxi? If you have a chance, you can guess who I am. Finally, I would like to ask Qingqing: Does the so-called plot description refer to the actual activities of things, or does it refer to the psychological activities of tasks? I have always believed that the description of psychological activities can better highlight the character's personality and promote the development of the plot, but after trying it for a long time, I still can't get it right. So, can anyone help me...

BBS saw Wen, we are both newcomers, keep working hard Speaking of which, you can consider adding more interesting plots~ This way you will feel more relaxed when reading the article~

I think the section about the nameplate is a bit wordy. Also, I personally think that when writing about characters, it is better to reveal the person slowly and little by little rather than introducing the person all at once. What do you think? Please refresh and update more, come on!

Are you from Yangzhou? Isn't Xizhong Middle School the same as Zhuxi Middle School? Support!

Maybe there should be more plot descriptions, so that it will be more attractive. I read the post on BS and ran here. We are all newbies, please work harder.

It's very well written, and it makes people feel slightly moved. The wind is gentle and the clouds are calm, I like it Come on!!!!