New book next door: Reborn and Doted on by the Regent King
Blurb:
Ji Niannian transmigrated into the legendary white-moonlight wife of a villainous big shot.
She thought she was about to reach the pinnacle of life.
Who could have guessed that on their wedding night, the villainous big shot would tell her, "Don't even dream that I'll love you."
Ji Niannian nodded obediently. While working hard to get revenge on the villainous big shot, she also tried to clear her own name.
Later, it seemed she'd cleared it a little too well...
The cold, arrogant, and possessive villainous big shot pinned Ji Niannian inside a carriage. "Love me again!"
Ji Niannian sneered. "Stop testing me. I never dreamed of having your love."
The villainous big shot sighed. "Now I'm the one dreaming of having your love..."
A cold, aloof, possessive God of War prince x a playful heroine who's sweet and salty
A wife-chasing-to-the-crematorium story. Nobody can escape the irresistible charm!
A carefree story. If one day it stops being carefree, don't curse me. The author must have forgotten!
*Runs off, covering her face.* _(:зゝ∠)_
Theme: Everyone is the protagonist of their own life.
I accidentally came across this article when I searched for another article with Bai Yueguang's name. To be honest, the first half of the article was really good, but it fell apart later. I don't know if the author didn't write an outline. The most obvious points are that the male protagonist's mental journey from wanting to rebel to not rebelling was too blunt. When the heroine and the male protagonist had a quarrel, they made a slip of the tongue and said that the male protagonist wanted to rebel, but the male protagonist actually denied it. Later, in the ending, it was said that the male protagonist wanted to rebel at the beginning and not just to take revenge on the Zhao family. It was obviously contradictory. In addition to the supporting characters, including the prince, the third prince, and Li Ruohuai, Fengxuan's characters were all very facial-shaped. The prince felt like cannon fodder, not like a prince. The third prince, not to mention, was Lin Wan's background throughout the whole process. Although the male protagonist's subordinates are all heroes in the author's works, they did not see the shining point. By the end, I remembered one name. It seems that the purpose of their appearance is to promote the plot, provide assistance to the male protagonist, and promote the relationship between the male and female protagonists. In my mind, the prince should be a person who is more than ruthless and lacks strategy, so he should look like a straw bag, but in fact, his subordinates should be very afraid of him, but they did not show it. The third prince should be a more upright and moderately affectionate person, but apart from his great love for Lin Wan, nothing else can really be shown. As for Li Huaiqiu He should be an elegant and noble young man, while Fengxuan is a carefree and unrestrained second-generation rich man. But because the perspective is focused on the female protagonist, I skipped them all. In fact, these characters are all worth leaving behind. I feel very regretful. The plot at the end can only be said to be a barely ending. There is not enough foreshadowing and the plot is unreasonable and very abrupt. Take the ending where the male protagonist becomes the king. In the previous article, it was not revealed at all that the male protagonist has any connection with the other side. He suddenly ran over and became the king. It was very fascinating. But overall, the heroine held up the whole book. It is still worth reading. The author will continue to work hard for the next book~
The author is really cute. I can tell that he is a newbie in writing. In fact, the author has written very well in the past, but the character description in the later part is not detailed enough. Each character is not distinct enough and the concept is good. If you like writing, you can read more books and see what good scene descriptions look like. Come on (???_??)?.
Emmmmm Isn't this the crayfish in Oh My Emperor? Does the author also read this?
Although it is still a bit rushed, it is not bloody at all, and it is barely finished! It's over. Good luck with the next one.
This time it finally seems smooth.
Yeah, it's much better after the modification.
The last few chapters are a bit too embarrassing. It's 9012, and there are still brothers who fall out because they can't stand the male protagonist and aren't ready to rebel? I said before that you, Lu Chen, had helped me so many times. But later on, if Lu Chen didn't rebel and take revenge, I couldn't understand why several brothers were about to fall out? And there is also a drugged stand-in for Princess Wen Yu whose IQ is off the line? Do you break down and grow old when you see a charred corpse? It's 9012, and all the dog-bloody jokes in ancient novels have been piled up in the last few chapters... It was originally very novel and interesting in the early stage, but why did it fall apart later on... There are a few holes that have not been filled in, ugh... I don't know what to say, I have finally caught up to the ending, okay, let's do this for now, I hope I can fix the ending when I have time in the future, goodbye.
Can't understand this ending
Damn it, the character design is still unfinished. Author, are you crazy? You rebelled and killed your father, but you still don't want to be emperor and wait for your whole family to be killed? Is the heroine mentally retarded? The male protagonist is also as stupid as a pig. What a waste of my money.
What kind of messy plot is this? It's so unfinished. What Lu Chen wrote in the end was reckless and uncool, and there was no sparkle at all. The heroine was infinitely marginalized. What did the Ji family do to eat, and what the hell.