A Farmer's Son's Struggle

The topic is good, but the article is poorly written and full of nonsense.

Is it serious if a 13-year-old grows a beard?

Why are there so many exclamation marks? It looks so awkward.

It really feels like a book I've read before...

The writing is really too novice

This article is an ancient text. Why are people's speech so modern? I have tried so hard to read it, but it still makes people feel that it is very funny. As a senior reader, the author used to read what kind of articles. I can't read ancient texts that are so straightforward. You might as well read more articles with exquisite writing style and exquisite words to accumulate experience. Writing is not easy, so how can I live up to my hard work? If it doesn't work, write modern articles first. At least it won't make people feel too out of line.

Original text: At that time, the imperial court encouraged people to open up wasteland and settle in Linshan County. There were also preferential conditions: tax exemption for three years, half tax for the fourth and fifth years, and normal taxes after that. This article: At that time, the imperial court encouraged people to settle in the south, and since the imperial court was newly established, there was no tax for the first three years, and then normal taxes were paid. Original text: Grandpa's brother Gu Boshan was a child student and was directly appointed as the village chief. This was one of the reasons why the Gu family did not clamor to return to their hometown. This article: When arriving at Anxi Village, Qin was appointed as the village chief because his father was a child. This is the reason why they settled in Anxi Village. Original text: His family now has three generations living together. The head of the household is his grandfather Gu Jishan, now 47 years old. He is a farmer who works part-time as a carpenter and occasionally has some extra income. Grandma Chen, 46 years old, is fierce and capable. Except for grandpa, everyone else in the family must listen to her arrangements. 11. The old couple had three sons and one daughter. The younger son died of the plague before they got married. The daughter fled after getting married and is still missing and has not been contacted. (A son died in infancy and a daughter disappeared) Now there are only two sons around. The eldest son is Gu Qingyun and his father Gu Dahe. He is 26 years old this year. He is married to Xiao Chen and has two daughters and one son. This article: Chen Xing's family now has three households living together. The head of the household is grandpa Chen Dazhuang, who is 45 years old this year. He is a part-time farmer and bricklayer. He occasionally earns some extra income. In his free time, he can hunt game in the mountains. He knows a lot about Orion fur and is in good health. Grandma Liu, 44 years old, is virtuous and capable. She is good at weaving and is loved and respected by the whole family. 11. The old couple had four sons and one daughter. One son died in childhood, but three sons and one daughter survived. The younger son disappeared while running for his life, and the daughter married the son of the eldest brother of the old Liu family in a village not far away. (One son died in infancy and another son disappeared) There are two sons around. The eldest son is Chen Xing's father, Chen Dalang, and Chen Niu. He is 27 years old this year, married to Xiao Liu, and has two daughters and one son.

I don't comment on whether I plagiarized or not. I once encountered an article I read at a certain point and said it was plagiarized. Occasionally, a few sentences were similar. As a result, readers made things worse and almost made a good article sink. I think plagiarism can remind the author of the similarities and ask the author to change it. You can also choose not to read it.

Don't plagiarize. That's my favorite book. The author thinks it's unreasonable for others to be selfish.

I compared the first three chapters. Since I don't know how to make a color palette, I estimated based on my feelings. This article is very similar to the one by Qu Liu Shui. Many words are copied, and some sentences have names and numbers changed. This should be considered plagiarism. The author seems to be a newbie, so I don't know if it was an unintentional mistake. If so, it is recommended to modify it quickly. (It would be even better if you have a patient friend who is willing to make a color palette for the two articles)