Prince of Tennis: Together with You

After reading it, I feel that some important plots have been omitted, resulting in the whole article having no ups and downs. It is relatively bland, and it seems that I am not very good at describing scenes. The competition and other things are just passed by. There is no passionate part in the article. When I came to the competition, I felt lonely and didn't remember anything (personal opinion, don't criticize). It is still great. At least the thoughts in my mind are described in words. People like me who only have ideas but no writing can only think about QAQ

After reading it, let me summarize my views. The ideas are good and the summary ability is not bad, but the character structure is relatively thin, not complete and distinct enough, and does not have a sense of hierarchy. Secondly, the technique is monotonous. It can be said that the entire novel is just a bland narration without any ups and downs, which makes people feel an indescribable discomfort. Let's put it this way, after reading the whole book, there is no highlight that makes people remember it immediately, and it can't arouse my emotions. Ah, I've finished reading this article. Well, do you want to continue reading? To put it simply, it has no eye-catching features, no special shining points, and no particularly big shortcomings. It is just mediocre. Another point is that there is no key point. I don't know if you have realized that in a chapter of the novel, your key point cannot be found. I know what you want to express, but the way you express it is just to repeat a single emphasis several times. Yes, I understand what you want to tell me, but just such words are unconvincing. You have to tell me and prove it to us from multiple aspects and angles, rather than simply repeating it without strength. What's more, you are so economical. You start the next chapter from the national competition and go straight to the end of the competition. It's like a running account. It's over before anyone can react. The middle is just a matter of who won and who lost. There are only less than 50 games in one game. It's pitiful. I was confused when I saw it. Something just flashed by. But sometimes a long description is used in some places that are not very important, which can easily make people miss the point and make them unclear. In addition, the context is incoherent, there is no foreshadowing in the front, and the following text appears suddenly without warning, which is very abrupt. Let's just say this much. To sum up, the technique is single, the characters are thin, the plot is monotonous, the ups and downs are small, the key points are highlighted, and the description is multi-faceted, multi-layered and multi-angle. I should save what should be spared and what should not be spared. Even the faucet must be stuffed in for me. Finally, you must try a variety of techniques and types. Finally, if you don't like my comments or suggestions, just pretend you didn't see it. If you really don't like it, just think I'm farting. Don't spray, thank you. (I know some of what I said is repeated. I am using a mobile phone and can't see what I posted before. Please don't pay attention. Thank you. I look forward to your reply, okay)

The male protagonists are all people who have gone through the apocalypse. Now I feel so frustrated and a bit weak. I fall for the same tricks and follow the crowd. After reading the whole story, I feel that there is nothing particularly exciting and it is all very bland.

After finishing the game, the writing and conception are very good, but it is a bit lackluster. It would be great if some detailed content of the game and emotional descriptions could be added, so that it would feel exciting. But it's still pretty

It's okay, but there are too few broken sentences, too many typos, and it's too streamlined. In fact, it's okay, it's pretty good-looking.

"She" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ It should be him

Update haha. . . Very good. . .

Second! Come on!

Suddenly I feel that Fengjing is a good CP pair.

I still don't understand why Oishi was selected