The Dragon-Proud-Heavenly-Type Disciple Always Pretends to Be Weak

Not bad, the characters are described in detail, but the plot is weak in comparison. The arrangement of each link is very purposeful, and the subsequent development can be guessed. Some information can be omitted appropriately to leave suspense, which will be more attractive. Like a Shakespeare play, the twists and turns are interesting. But this will take a lot of effort and test your skills, so it's not easy.

I quickly finished this article in two days. Many small details in the article are quite interesting (such as the weapon refining ring and the hanging red rope). It can be seen that the author has put thought and effort into it, but the design of the final BOSS decisive battle is a bit anticlimactic. Especially in the early stage of the system, so much thought was put into it, including fighting for parts and layout. In the end, it was solved in less than one chapter. It felt a bit too hasty when reading. The suspense of this article is well laid out, especially the first two chapters, one explaining rebirth and the other explaining feeling, which are very gripping. However, there is too much plot development in Chapters 2 to 5, which is a bit redundant. Of course, the side plot is foreshadowing and cannot be deleted, but if the author can appropriately abbreviate the direct statement and instead mention it in the form of memories, the early reading experience of the article will be more fascinating. Finally, the author's writing style is fluent, and there is nothing wrong with it after reading through it. However, you need to pay attention to the correct use of "De Di De". Above~

Huh? Isn't Elder Xuanhong the master of Brother Chu? Brother Chu is the junior brother of the leader. Why is the leader called Senior Brother Xuanhong? Is it a typo?

I feel like the author has a hard time writing the main plot. After nearly 100 chapters, the main plot can't advance. The plot has been piling up before the conflict between the ghost clan and the real world. The various plot conflicts written before can't be written to the climax. It just passed by softly. It's a bit regretful.

I like it very much, keep up the good work!

Please, the new article is very attractive to me, please try your best to update it quickly, please, please

You are really short... ┌ ○ ┐ │Absolute|?,,? │Transfer|?ω? ) │Book _ |// └ ○ ┘ (⌒)

Although I have finished buying it, I feel that the plot is very good, but the writing style is a bit lacking.

Speaking of which, I recently chased and basically drove very fiercely. I was still a little dazed when I saw this (I actually did it...?). I always feel that Chu Lian's consciousness has not completely dissipated. This is an opportunity.

After reading it, Jinjiang is still too clear, which is sad.