A woman with the bloodline of an orchid demon awakens the mysterious power of a jade heirloom passed down through generations as she seeks the truth behind her sister's disappearance. She transmigrates through time, meets a wonderful man, and encounters the fate that awaits her…
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Perhaps because of the short story, the ending of the chapter was a bit rushed. In addition, the description of details in the whole article is not enough. Regarding Xi Wu's sadness and despair, the description of the different emotional changes caused by Yun Wu's series of movements is not enough. It seems that although the melancholy can be experienced, there is no deeper emotional feeling that changes with the changes of the characters. However, in general, it seems that the author's writing style is good, and he still has a deep understanding of ancient spirits. Moreover, the most important thing is that he will not be the same as others~~~~~ I support Bubu and hope that your articles will become more and more exciting
The effect of the short story is that I always feel a little disappointed when I see the ending...
It was supposed to be a touching scene, but why didn't I feel moved at all? Is my heart already so old? Author's reply:
My heart is also getting old. The feelings that should be pure are so pale in my writing~~~In fact, my writing power is not enough to write touching words
Is it because of the short story? Will the transition be slightly faster?
It feels a bit stiff to take over. How long has it been since the previous chapter? Why did the eldest young master accept the heroine so quickly and seem to have a good relationship with her? The heroine can cast a glance at the young master, and her attitude changes too quickly. The author replies:
In fact, when I think about it, it will be more fulfilling, but when I write, I miss a lot
It still feels a little weird...
Can a maid make the decision? Just casually bring someone into the house who doesn't know who he is and is dressed weirdly? Moreover, she doesn't feel strange or wary?
The paragraph in the middle feels a bit drawn out.
Watching the dialogue, I habitually want to add words, haha
Read and rate the article! Author's reply:
Thank you for your share...
Perhaps because of the short story, the ending of the chapter was a bit rushed. In addition, the description of details in the whole article is not enough. Regarding Xi Wu's sadness and despair, the description of the different emotional changes caused by Yun Wu's series of movements is not enough. It seems that although the melancholy can be experienced, there is no deeper emotional feeling that changes with the changes of the characters. However, in general, it seems that the author's writing style is good, and he still has a deep understanding of ancient spirits. Moreover, the most important thing is that he will not be the same as others~~~~~ I support Bubu and hope that your articles will become more and more exciting
The effect of the short story is that I always feel a little disappointed when I see the ending...
It was supposed to be a touching scene, but why didn't I feel moved at all? Is my heart already so old? Author's reply: My heart is also getting old. The feelings that should be pure are so pale in my writing~~~In fact, my writing power is not enough to write touching words
Is it because of the short story? Will the transition be slightly faster?
It feels a bit stiff to take over. How long has it been since the previous chapter? Why did the eldest young master accept the heroine so quickly and seem to have a good relationship with her? The heroine can cast a glance at the young master, and her attitude changes too quickly. The author replies: In fact, when I think about it, it will be more fulfilling, but when I write, I miss a lot
It still feels a little weird...
Can a maid make the decision? Just casually bring someone into the house who doesn't know who he is and is dressed weirdly? Moreover, she doesn't feel strange or wary?
The paragraph in the middle feels a bit drawn out.
Watching the dialogue, I habitually want to add words, haha
Read and rate the article! Author's reply: Thank you for your share...